The last page lmaooo

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Alright, that last page got me

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The Underside of Sumire's Breast comment appearing multiple times throughout the pages was somewhat distracting. In the future, I would say just include for the first page any body writing/sign appears rather than every time it appears.

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@LapisLunatic, ok thanks for the feedback. I tried doing the thing, where you write the word at the place where the tattoo is supposed to be, but it looked like shit

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The presence of the hooded girls was welcome at the party. It balances the constant exposure of the main character.

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i kept expecting the tattoo to suddenly change

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@coykili: I just keep my bullshit to the after pages and try not to pull silly shit during the actual story

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p. 22

What are they saying. that aoi will take care of everything?

while this story was mega hot

the incest tease without any of the babes getting incest pregnant, like Sumire by Aoi, is a bit disappointing

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chapters 3-9 here: /g/1877406/f68536b1cb/

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Raw: /s/899cbfd669/1640380-167

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