Meh.

I can't get into stuff like this, Ritsuka has an actually distinctive look and design, so even if you do this no eyes hentai protagonist shit there's no reason not to at least give him distinguishing features like his hair

Base +7, JaySlaxxx +1

A nice (if a bit silly) full color work.
The sfx lettering is very attractively done. I really like the look of the "KYAH!!!" on p18 in particular.
The normal typography could use some work, for example I do wish there were fewer lines that consisted entirely of an ellipses. Some strange decisions made on line breaks, but nothing egregious.
A couple things overlooked in QC as well, like the lowercase i on p22 or the wrong form of "too" on p24.
Definitely not a bad showing considering it seems to have been typeset (and uploaded!) by the original artist. I hope to see more from them in the future. Though judging on the artsyle and left-to-right reading, you might fair better uploading to the "western" category and adding the "comic" tag.

Base +9