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Hey, this is pretty good. A couple of things:

I don’t know if “Bam” is the best way to translate パ. Maybe something like “slap” or “smack” would be better.

You should consider using different fonts for moan bubbles. It makes it easier to distinguish what text is dialogue and what text is moaning.

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Seems the author only used the AV idea to put together some disjointed school girl scenes without any actual plot.

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What a bizarre complaint, Nicosai.

"Waiter! There's porn in my plot!"

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Thanks for the input ZedsShadow!
I'll release the second chapter in a few days

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She fucked the pole
She fucked the fucking pole wtf

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heisei 36 lol

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