That was great! Loved every page of this. Thank you!

Base +6, hadokjen +6, akunoko -30, Holion +7, GGS +10, techaki +8, skunsas +6, Nomake Wan -17, Sylphvine +6

judging by first page this one was from downsampled raw

Base +14, Nomake Wan +17, Reize1 +13, NeBuR1997 +6, Sylphvine +6

Some spelling/grammar issues:

[p2]
"homoeroom" -> "homeroom"
"she passed out" -> "she passes out"

[p3]
"on business trip" -> "is on a business trip"

[p9]
"away business trip" -> "away on a business trip"

[p10]
"so many lesbian stuff" -> "so much lesbian stuff"
"interested with" -> "interested in"

[p11]
"desire [...] have begun" -> "desire [...] has begun"

[p17]
"Lick it off you" -> maybe "I'm going to lick it off you" (?)

[p21]
"became more and more escalated" -> "escalated more and more"
"develops and extends" -> "developing and extending"

[p26]
"ends up became" -> "ended up becoming"

Base +26, Glovelove. +20

Hm yes, the women I draw shall be granted the following:
-Yaoi hands
-Goblin ears

Base +5, baxtus -12