Support me on Patreon for early access to full version as it's released Blah blah. Otherwise I'll be releasing this one on 3/15/2021 for free as usual.

https://www.patreon.com/DFRYWOLF

"Otherwise I'll be releasing this one on 3/15/2020."
You'll be releasing this 8 months ago?

It's not bad, some more practise on the basic anatomy would improve the images in general. Lighting really helps with atmosphere and moods and having backgrounds are important.
The most noticable thing here is the blond woman's very large forehead. That could use some work
Also, GET RID OF THE CENSORSHIP! Posting your own work on this site censored, should be considered heresy~!.

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Thank you for the feedback, my anatomy does need some brush up. I'm gonna start doing active studies soon to improve.

Last edited on 02 December 2020, 05:36.

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@Tr2n
The way D-FRY has released their other comics is a preview release, next some time with only patreon supporters getting the full uncensored release, and then releasing it full and uncensored.
It's probably the best compromise.

Btw even I took a while to study anatomy. It's been maybe over 4 years since I picked up drawing again. I think I can say I'm good at it now, but I'm still too critical of most of my work to be comfortable sharing it. I don't have the creative mind nor the sense to compose a comic either, not to say I haven't tried. I've never been good at writing creative pieces, so I'd have to commend you on that.

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Wish this wasn't censored other than that it's good

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