Decent art, the story is meh... kinda typical of its genre. The translation is horrible and inaccurate. The editing and typesetting obviously shows no effort at all went into it. 1.5 outta 5

Base +7, hojii +5, MobileCrusader +4, Ooe Kintarou +3, pressFtofail +6

yeah call him onii-chan but only when you're having sex, that's not weird

Base +21

A very sweet doujin ruined by horrible translation!

Story: 8/10
Art: 6/10
Translation: 1/10

'1' instead of '0' because it's still better than those rewrites that completely changes the entire story including changing the names to "Mark" and "Sally" and whatnot while saying they've "translated" it to English.

Base +6