On one hand, the actual transformation play here is fantastic, perhaps even better than the other books. The way their transformations finish one at a time with the rest of them helplessly watching is really, really good. On the other hand...man, I really, really miss having two versions, one with the onahole's thoughts and one without. Guess it wouldn't fit here, but god damn, that was such a brilliant idea for this kink that they should have shoehorned it in anyway.