Hey there, a new set of my captions. I tried to improve as much as possible in writing, editing and grammar.

My english isn't perfect yet, I am not native and there's still room for improvement.
This time I credited the artists I was wrong not to do it last time.
Like last time if you enjoy the captions feel free to share them and my reddit.

Various futadom captions are in this set : loving, rough, BDSM, Vanilla

I hope you enjoy them.
Let me know what you think in comments. Always open to Constructive criticism !

I only read a few, but they were pretty terrible. No sense of pacing, way too wordy, and the dialogue sounds completely unnatural. These aren't awful sins in and of themselves, but they completely sap any sense of eroticism out of an idea.

I'd recommend practicing non-erotic prose quite a bit more before continuing to try with erotic prose; really put some work into how to shave your writing down—less is almost always more, especially in a caption, and once you get a better feel for how to concisely express an idea, you'll have an easier time with pacing, as well. Also let yourself get a better feel for how native English speakers talk in normal dialogue, as it'll give you a better foundation for erotic dialogue.

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love your post, really good! some weird speaking mistakes or pacing issues in some but overall very solid, keep it up you're good and with more attempts you will be one of the top caption creator like elzi.

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i cant tell which artists drew what..

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Pretty good, keep it up.

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Hello, are you accepting requests too? Would love to ask for captions/JOI for a pic^^

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