Her parents are the real MVPs of this story.

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Interesting that you translated コリコリ on page 7 as “crisp.” In this context it’s certainly “hard” or “firm”. Are you a native English speaker?

Also, no one says “are you fine?” (Pg 14). It’s “are you okay”?

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Her foot looks so awkward on page 9, It's pretty hard to unsee O.o but pretty nice book besides that :O

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@ZedsShadow Yeah, I am. I went with crisp because I wanted to make it sound food-related when she asked him how they tasted.

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Who sleeps with a pullover and vest?

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This is pure vanilla extract.

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Surprised no ones said, "Why can't all sisters be like this?"

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