Love shimaidon of these two goddesses, great job. Though I'm afraid you forgot to translate a speech bubble at the bottom of p4.

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Untranslated panel on page 4.

Also some weird english all over the place

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proof for the bad grammar tag:

P2:
"Bring yourself, Ereshkigal!!"

P3:
"It''s always been like this after I'd drunk up the potion"

P4:
"You can just do onani alone!"
untranslated panel in the bottom right

P5:
"I'm going wild when the dick go deeper"

P6:
"Ishtar is licking my ball while I fuck Ere-chan"

P7:
"Being able to do this on these two goddess... is such a great deals, even though the holy stone has been used up at all"

P8:
"Senpai! I got you a potion that good for your body!"

hold this bad grammar tag

link to the raw so that someone competent can rescue this: /g/1581835/118326b43e/

Last edited on 17 February 2021, 15:37.

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Hmmm... The black is quite off. Especially with true black typeset that you choose to go with.

It's not digital raw so if you don't have enough time for paper grain cleaning & dusting, the minimum you could do for physical raw is just level it. Should took less than a min.

Clip at around 55ish for the black point, gamma as is or 1.1 if you want to retain some details.

Even a simple clipping already makes quite the difference as seen in this similar, CN-translated gallery:
/g/1544442/e123230197/

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"I'm going wild when the dick go deeper" made my entire day

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Man, I'm 'bout to make a guide on how to level pages on E since so many people don't do it. .-. Nobody likes an ashy page, man!

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I got a good laugh

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Good grief... these 'translations' make every character sound like they have Downs Syndrome or something!

What a boner killer...

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Adding to Daruna's comment

p2
"your bonds with someone will be maxed out after drink this"

p4
"why do you say it suddenly...."

p5
"i do feel good too, and want to cum it inside of your pussy"

love you glovelove <3333333333

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