TL: Nishimaru
Commission: Anon
JP RAW: /g/1042857/474da2f169/

the guy who translate this.............A FUCKING HERO!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I'll be honest, I like this one. Just because this is a simple straight story and not like the other complex one where the MC gets NTRed by his dad and childhood friend and after some time his dad dies and he finally fucks his childhood friend, but also hints for the future to fuck his 'sister' that was the child of his dad and childhood friend. I know hentai logic, but lets be honest, her mother and his father would have been a great pair.

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The author should make:
1. one where the mc hook up with natsuki's mom but his dad still hook up with natsuki.
2. one where natsuki hook up with both dad and mc.
3. one where dad hook with natsuki and her mom.

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I almost going to ignore the gallery because of the "Rewrite" part on the title lol

Thank goodness it's not.

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took me a while to notice the rewrite is part a title and not a 'rewrite' gallery lmao

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Holy crap it's here! Thanks for the translation! Man I love the whole story, there's something about Natsuki that just make me want to see more of her. All hail tanned ponytailed tomboy!

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p.140 "ughh... you're saying that stuff again..." should be pink cause it's natsuki's line.

i think this is the first hentai i read has "gay play" where the girl plays as big bro to the guy fucking her while the guy plays as younger bro. lol

Last edited on 18 February 2021, 11:57.

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Great Nyarlathotep, I never thought that it would be translated... It's just miracle!
Out of 3 with Natsuki it's my favourite. simple story, no NTR, characters are just accepting their feeleng without stupid plot like fucking the friend's dad and fall in love with him just because, MC is shown the character and not being just beta in first, strange in second.
Thank you for translation! Great work!

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p.475 p,531 p.533 p.534 next 15 years there may be oyakodon. lol

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So if you could go back in time you would still aim for bitch? Bruh...

And going back in time automatically stops the father from being a rapist and she becames even dumber? The plot feels more forced than a rape scene LOL

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Thankyou so much for this stuff

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Ah yes the "please don't hate me guys, h-here's a vanilla version. Please buy my products in the future..." release.

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>nooooooo, you can't eliminate my contortionist ntr plot nooo noooooooooooooooooo!

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Hummm... Did MC actually not know about his father raping Natsuki in the past :o
The afterwords about the dad kinda made me laugh too. "For some reason, he gets into a relationship with Natsuki and marries her." Did the author forget the "for some reason" being him raping her XD

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@ Mumiyo:

"Did MC actually not know about his father raping Natsuki in the past"

What MC known: one day he saw his dad fucking his childhood friend brain out. Then sometime later his dad marriages his childhood friend.

Only reader known the dad force himself on the childhood friend.

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thaks for the translation

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I actually find it satisfying seeing this originally just you run-of-a-mill NTR manga turn a bittersweet Vanilla manga have the vanilla version seemingly the more popular one with the author works relating with this set of characters as of now have all of it focusing on the 2 childhood friend budding relationship with the exception being the 1st work

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This is a fantastic choice of a translation

thankyou so much Moronical

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NTR his dad...

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So this is the end of the series right?

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@Father unless the author decides to do more (like they mention in the closing comments).

Personally I'd be down with the daughter idea too, or just a general epilogue continuation

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I stopped procrastinating and give it a read, and I saw error(s) :

- p67 : You wrote "He said it all of a sudden, I what it meant..." sounds like there's a missing "know" between "I" and "what"
- p99 : You wrote "contempt" when you meant "content"

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If the author does more , i hope we can see what the story (and sex scene) has to offer on second route for either 'mother', 'daughter' or both.

but will have to brace for the the pain in the heart if it contain ntr.

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i want the sister to get fucked so that the childhood friend sees it and realizes what exactly she did all those years ago as well as the grim realization that both of them together being aware of what she did would trap her in a house were her own daughter absorbs every aspect of affection from the man that should be her husband and she'll only get more compatible with him.

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Great work! And now everything is right in the world! I wanted to see a part 3 with the ending of the sequel of the other universe but a sequel to this one would be epic also.

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Actually weirdly enough, more than a follow up to the little sister or another route with the mom or whatever, I'd like to see a continuation of the original route.
Like what happens when the Dad inevitably passes away in that one where the MC mostly moved on?

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Wonder why the artist did this, was there a lot of complaints from the original story or did he just want to do this?

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Hellaaaaaaaa Thanks for this trans!

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@reigengine

Reading the afterword, it seems that the author got 'tons' of complaints. I don't think that the author was aware that the tomboy childhood friend crowd don't really jive all that well with the NTR crowd.
As for me, I'm just happy that we got better art in this than what was in the NTR comics. It could have easily been the other way around.

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Imagine the salt from so many coomers that ejected from both their unwilling dicks and their eyes over the story of an NTR doujin.
"I reject your reality, and substitute my own!"
I didn't read it, nor will I, but it's still pretty pathetic. Just like that meme edit of Emergence where the two stooges from JoJo show up and Deus Ex Machina her alive.

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The Vanilla is strong with this one and I love it. A simple and sweet story about a second chance at true love and realizing one's true feelings for someone they only saw a close friend. Also, I kinda wanted Taichi's Dad and Natsuki's Mom to hook up in the end

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About author's comment about possible Natsuki's mom route and Natsuki's daughter Himeko route, here's my take :

* Mother route : probably starts after MC discovers his dad and Natsuki's relationship. He gets depressed and Natsuki's mom finds him like and takes pity. She helps him out and slowly fall in love and they get into relationship. Later it's Natsuki's turn to find about her "little brother" porking her mother and is weirded about it. Stuff happen, Natsuki confronts MC, both get angry, MC confesses he had feelings for her, they get into hate/weird sex, and both decide that it's "too late" and both go back to their current partner. They never speak of this again and live happily with their partner, each one making a family of their own.

* Natsuki's daughter route : It's gonna be basically what MC's father done to Natsuki. Basically MC groom the girl to be his sex girlfriend, as some Natsuki clone he never got to experience. Later, they got careless and Natsuki finds out while her daughter is still underage. Natsuki doesn't take it well and banned MC from approaching her family ever again. Himeko as stubborn as her mother and seeks out MC. MC pussies out but Himeko is having none of it and blackmails him into continuing the relationship. MC understands he screwed up the girl's life and sort of "takes responsibility" promises Himeko to become his wife once she's grown up. Epilogue will be Himeko realizing MC used her as stand in for Natsuki and she leaves him. MC accepts it and move on with his life full of regrets. Much darker than previous works but considering the situation, I hardly see a good end in this route.

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The author has officially established The Kagemusya Ero Multiverse.

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Would it be possible for him to rewrite some of his other stories cause the one with that mom and stepbrother could use a rewrite (so its a story about only him and his mom no stupid stepbrother and friends ntr stuff just sweet mom and son incest) i freaking loved this rewrite.

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I had a good chuckle reading the FMC getting jealous for something so childs play compared to what happened to MC before time get rewound.
@vivendicrust
And its not a multiverse with how the author described in in the end, time literally went back so there is not other "old" timeline. Its gone. Poor 2 kids don't even exist anymore.
@ Detram
You are a cuck though, you got cucked, shouldn't you feel happy? lmao

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I wanted to like this, but the regular usage of mommy and incest play just kind of ruined it for me. Great art, but the dialogue kills it for me.

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The fact that this exists is so fucking funny to me. Truly, the people have spoken.

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@ Evyy

so basically the author is all in on MC being a wimp rather than leaning into that hatefulness. its almost like he isnt willing to prescribe the same hentai logic to MCs endevors. like wtf is he playing at? this SHOULD have been the childhood friend but somehow SHE went all in despite having someone close to her hurt by her actions. it basically sounds like he got the story out and wanted to do something higher brow but it still comes off stupid, thank god he didnt continue then

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