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[Sudoo Kaoru] Spirited Away With a Carnivorous Girl (L -Ladies & Girls Love- 03) [English] [HellItself]

[すどおかおる] 肉食少女と神隠し (L -Ladies & Girls Love- 03) [英訳]

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Posted:2021-02-25 02:58
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Language:English  TR
File Size:16.62 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:407 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.39

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Posted on 25 February 2021, 02:58 by:   HellItself    PM
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It's been a long time lol. I'm really starting to like Sudoo Kaoru...

I'm pretty active on Twitter: https://twitter.com/HellItself2
Posted on 25 February 2021, 05:28 by:   THDragon    PM
Score +96
@HellItself

Did you know that none of your works are leveled? Rather than waste huge amounts of time whiting out entire bubbles on every single page, you could've simply leveled your scans and saved yourself that headache. You're also not the first person I've seen on this site that doesn't know how to level their scans, and you certainly won't be the last. It's a common, but easily fixed mistake. As a general rule of thumb, speech bubbles and text boxes are supposed to be fully white, as well as the edges of the pages. If they're grey or greyish, that's a pretty good indicator that your scans need to be leveled.
Also of note is the characters' skintones, which I notice have greyish noise in them. Again, another indicator that you need to level your scans. Doing so will also get rid of the page bleedthrough (yet another sign that your scans need to be leveled) on some of the pages in your project, most notably pages 4 and 6.

http://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/1.html#3, which is a guide on how to properly level your scans. As an editor for the LWB scanlation group, I assure you that it doesn't take a lot of time and will make what you do look a million times better.

At least you know how to source full-size scans and your typesetting isn't cancer (though personally, I wouldn't use Manga Temple, your only font, to typeset), though I wonder why you put your translated SFX on the margins of the pages rather than overlapping the corresponding kanji. On some pages, I can't tell what SFX goes where, and it's quite annoying to have to dart from margin to middle of the page and back again. Please put your SFX over the kanji or SFX bubbles that they're supposed to be in rather than the margins.
Posted on 25 February 2021, 06:28 by:   Abarrow    PM
Score +30
This story is continued in next volumes.

L -Ladies & Girls Love- 04
/mpv/1178649/449f6ac5aa/#page127

L -Ladies & Girls Love- 05
/mpv/1178650/2bea53e2ce/#page127
Posted on 25 February 2021, 14:59 by:   Ancient-Alien    PM
Score +58
Manga Temple is a pretty ugly font and definitely not suited to typeset a yuri manga. You should check out Chinacat, Dupree and Fennario. You can download them for free on dafont.com.
Posted on 22 March 2021, 04:42 by:   Krowler    PM
Score +24
Damn this is very vanilla. But it's nice.

I wish all hentai had at most this level of censorship, the little bars aren't even opaque.
The shit I'm usually into have either multiple pitch black bars plastered all over the place or mosaic that makes the pussies look like vegetable soup.

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