Translation: v_rustl
Cleaning & Typesetting: LunaticSeibah
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/1591263/GIRLFriend39;s-15/

Raws:
JP: /g/1303526/4701c11e0d/
CN: /g/1385208/494aa039fe/
KR: /g/1475907/6b7b15c73b/

Note: This wasn't priority until I saw the Musashi one, so I ended rushed this one asap. This Jalter doujin is a 10/10 for me.

Empty bubbles on pages 6 & 16 bottom left region.

And it's totally visible that this was rushed. Several bubbles from the moans have bits of leftover original text and sometimes you crossed the border of the bubbles with your brush. Examples can be found on page 6 right panel second row.

I totally get your exitement to put out stuff you really like, but you should extend your time for QCing your work.

Edit:
@LunaticSeibah
First the obivious: thanks for fixing. And second: It wasn't meant to demoralize or discourage you. But editing a manga fast or editing it good are normally complete opposites. With time and experience the gap between fast and good will shrink and you'll be able to make something that looks good faster.
The cleaning of the first version was at CGrascal level at best, and that's nothing to be proud of.
Just take the advice to put more time in to qcing your work as what it was intended, a well meant advice from a momentarily grumpy Alien (or an idiot who once forgot to upload the pages if you prefer).

Last edited on 02 March 2021, 20:38.

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