Ahh yes the new game by famed Game Developer Bideo Bojima starring Keanu Reedus: Life Stranding. A game for true gamers

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@Ron Jambo

As an editor for the LWB scanlation group, I see numerous issues with your work. First issue: your scans aren't full-sized. You simply right-clicked on the pictures and downloaded the resized files instead of using the full 3000px files. There are 3 ways to source full-size scans (using another raw gallery as an example):

1.) Provided you have enough GP, you can download the original archive via "Archive Download" on the right-hand side of the gallery, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GS9gM/54c75da594.png
2.) You can torrent the file, but make sure that they're full size (ie. NOT x1280), directly underneath "Archive Download".
3.) Finally, you can click on this option at the bottom of every page to download the original source image: https://puu.sh/GS9l8/0c8c824f2b.png

Second issue: your scans are not leveled. Notice the greyish haze covering every single page? That's a sure sign that your scans need to be leveled.
http://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/1.html#3, which will guide you on how to properly level scans.

Now onto the main issue, like so many other projects I've seen before: your typesetting, which is a gigantic mess. Your fonts are oftentimes too big with crowded bubbles, constantly leaving the bubble margins, non-congruent font sizes (oftentimes with different font sizes within the same bubble, a big no-no), weird text shapes and placement, centering issues, and weirdly enough, you erasing existing text to fit some bubbles when all you needed to do is simply reduce the file size instead of using a masking layer to unnecessarily erase text in the bubble. Not to toot my own horn, but I'll link a page of a project that I myself typeset to show proper typesetting (view on sadpanda): /s/8f263df7e8/1192080-3.
And the most important part of that one page? The typesetting is the same throughout the entire 38 page chapter I typeset, if you read through the entire thing.
Notice how my fonts are properly centered, sized, and most imporantly, consistent? It also makes reading text much easier to do and much easier to follow along.

This is a comprehensive resource that everybody should follow whenever they want to edit and post something on e-hentai: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/. You can benefit from this as well. In fact, this website should be required reading for anybody who wants to post their scanlations on e-hentai.

Also page 6 is a duplicate of page 5, as said below by red death68.

Last edited on 08 March 2021, 21:37.

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Souka means sou-ka...
Dafuq ?

Sometimes I believe some people shouldn't be allowed to translate stuff

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Page 6 is a duplicate of page 5

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