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Translated by: HMC Translation
Cleaning by: Cronote

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The translation quality seems pretty good, but it would be more accurate to write the girl's name as Malina, since the game this is referencing is originally in English.

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Need more helltaker doujins

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Some sloppy grammar in places but not a bad translation. And I agree we need more Helltaker doujins. Especially Malina.

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Am I the only one weirded out by Malina smiling? I'm just so used to her default look.

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Grammar needs serious work.

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Is the translation for page 3 right? The two are sisters but it's almost like the author didn't know that.

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@enterthepanda Good eye. The Japanese text has Zdrada saying Malina was "the loneliest girl in Hell, so I just had to hang out with her~" Numerous other translation flubs in this, but that one does stand out the most.

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I think the writer or the translator forgot that Malina and Zdrada are sisters. There's one throwaway line but otherwise they seem to think they're just friends.

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sorry to say but i don't think the translator is at the level where he/she can be given any translation commissions.
to have this many mistakes in just one page and getting paid for it is simply unacceptable.
it's another thing if it's free, but if this is really a commissioned job, i feel sorry for the commissioner.

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I can deal with the sloppy grammar, but that COMIC SANS almost make me gouge my eyes out of their sockets with a spoon. Thanks anyway.

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Couldn't get Malina's name right?

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