Another re-write/edit for Circle Hitori. Ending 1 is my own idea for the end, while Ending 2 is the original ending.

Hope you enjoy.

After all the bad comments from the last ones and massive 1 stars, no, we don't enjoy.

Base +12, Azelath +7, Aisk1000 +8, Flandre-chan +7, Aeson +6, annoying_you +8, Alaephant +6, neoncamo +6, SCSS +19, McMadow -6, blaqkthespian +6

I can't judge the translation, it doesn't seem too bad, but you should realy take some time and learn a bit of editing. this is a pain to read

Base +6, GA3N +23, Jiiru +9, xxlover27 +6, speedingAndroid +8, Cool69420 +1, blaqkthespian +6, Freelander26 +13

This reads like if someone read through the entire wikipedia fetish page and put everything in a single hentai

Base +5, kamikamyu +7, xxlover27 +6

I can enjoy this despite the less than perfect editing. It's better than not understanding it at all.

Base +6, eliohoi +1, Aeson -6, subz3ro +17, shadowknight007 -7, Estel37 -8, fierylion +5, RDT12345 +2, McMadow +6, Freelander26 +13

Jesus, you're even writing your own fucking endings? I'm surprised you included the original in there at all.

You seriously gotta stop. Get some people who know how to do this together if you really want to do this, and re-do the ones you've put out.

You uploaded this a few days after the other ones there's no fucking way you put in enough time to make it either accurate or good.

Base +8, Aeson +6, xxlover27 +6, Person8 +7, KTSBG1218 -3, Lord.Kenko +6, Slarka +7, McMadow -6, blaqkthespian +6

Bros... This is the first translations in the last FIVE years. There may be no next translation. Are you really going to whine about the ugly text?

Base +6, daman11 +6, Aeson -6, Wanspell -6, fierylion +5, MartinMcSurvive +6, KTSBG1218 +3, Strypes -6, McMadow +6, StatisticallyNP -12

So... "happy" ending?

Base +6