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Can' t wait to see what happens next

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An alternative universe where Toriyama stopped giving Goku handjobs and let Gohan remain in the spotlight.

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Strongest saiyan; so I guess this assumes Super never happened

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我tm社保，，，

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@hjerry: More in line with that MikinTodo said. If they're giving Gohan credit for beating Buu, that not only excludes Super, it assumes Gohan actually got the job done in Z without dead people needing to be revived. Also it could be that this Gohan isn't aging normally: Bra refers to him like he's an equal, rather than the man old enough to be her father that he should be.

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I might be wrong about this but I'm almost certain there's some sort of tracing going on here, with scenes from the artist Youhei-dan Shinga doing his Naruto work.

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Nah it's not just you. I noticed this dude traced over some of yamamotos dragon ball doujin artwork as well in his previous work. Untalented wierdos always do that shit

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@IonGiveAf. First of all, I don't trace. I draw it free hand using references, sometimes straight off my phone when I'm working on a board. I mix and mash traits, sometimes for practice, other times for fun. "Imitation is the greatest form of flattery." I enjoy Yamamoto's and Yohei-dan's work, but I wouldn't think of tracing. That goes against my code. If you're gonna critique work, try not to insult the artist who is fine with displaying some of his work publicly.

@sadikus. Second of all, I don't really appreciate having two separate comics thrown up onto a single post. I don't mind this being here, but please remove pages 4 to 9.

Gee, thanks for voting down my initial comment. I'm sure it must be fine insulting the artist who's writing this porn for you guys to read. It's not like it's upsetting or anything.

I'm just pointing out this comic is missing pages, has included pages that are not part of it, and it isn't in order. Just be aware of that.

Last edited on 21 July 2020, 22:31.

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When Gohan is actually doing "Training" while Goku Vegeta and the gang are out fighting~

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Hmm, I was actually looking forward to a dialogue pages of Pan successfully convincing Gohan to smash her, and then a dialogue page of Videl successfully convincing Gohan to keep smashing Pan. Sex is good though.

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@Mikintodo Shut up Goku hater why do all of you Goku haters always want to hate on Goku for just leave the damn man alone this comic has nothing to do with him yet you still take shots at him and before you call me a Goku fanboy I’m not I’m a Vegeta fan, but that doesn’t mean I dislike Goku.

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@IonGiveAf For the record, I'm still very salty over that comment and it pisses me off that people keep up-scoring it because it tells me that the majority of people here are fine with insulting artists who create work for people's enjoyment. I don't trace.

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@TheWriteFiction Hey, I am curious where you came across reference for page 6, is it from places like Paheal or something like that?

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Are there pages missing? For instance. How did she go from masturbating outside the door to suddenly in a threeway kissing Bra?

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@magi34 I use a lot of references in my work, most quite obvious for comics that I create as practice, but others less obvious for work that has a bit more work behind it. I always eye frame all of my drawings without any tracing, and make changes here and there to appropriately differentiate from the original images. I managed to grab a few references, some from comics on *****.

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I liked this manga. Pan is very naughty.

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you posted the full color version?

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I’d like to see that Shower Time one someday.

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