The first chapter of my comic! I'm planning for it to be a long, slow burning series with a bimbofication mdom focus and with a cast of diverse characters.
Please support me on patreon if you enjoy my work! This series will be available to patrons 1 chapter at a time, 1 week in advance. Chapter two will be on patreon shortly!
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I'm a little worried that making the story about Emma being corrupted when she has that face is a mistake. She looks like a troll. No amount of make-up can fix that. Actually, it's more accurate to say the way she looks is very inconsistent. The place she looks like a troll is page 8.
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Looking back at this I only mentioned the negative bits. Your story looks solid and the renders pretty good as well. The reason I mentioned the face was because I care. You've already started addressing it in the later chapters. If you can make her genuinely attractive at some point without sacrificing the sensibility of the story I see no reason this can't become a long and good corruption story.
Very good main character guy, very Asian-esque and suited to the role with Black hair and goatee, a dominating feeling on a male character in any comic.