This one was presented as a text page after each picture. Most of the text was just explaining what was happening in the picture, so I lifted the dialog and only the necessary details and dropped them into the pics more like a comic. I'm pretty happy how it turned out.
Some pages were bigger than others. Where possible I adjusted sizes so that the pics in a sequence had the same size (rather than one being bigger). So they kind of start off small, then get big in the middle, then back to small at the end. That's just the way they were posted. As a result, I had to adjust the balloons and font size in the middle, so if it looks a bit inconsistent, that's why. Next time I do one of these, I'll probably just drop them all to the same size so I don't have to mess with the font size, etc.
For some reason Sensei didn't include pics for any of the cum shots. So I mocked some up. I also had to repeat some pages in order to get all the dialog in. Whew, I ended up doing lots of tweaks on this one, but I think it's my favorite of the series so far.
Yoko turned out to be my favorite. And I really enjoyed the sweet little moments of bonding between mother and daughter. I'm sure Kaede hated her mother when she was young. It's nice to see that they've patched things up now that she's just like Yoko.
I ended up leaving it out for space reasons, but Sensei did give the ladies full names as: MIHASHI KAEDE and YOSHIDA YOKO.
For those interested in the rest of the series, here's the list of raws from the poster. Of these, only #9 and #12 have been translated to English (I don't think they knew it was a series so the titles aren't marked the way I'm doing it). Both feature Mom's that were not in this one. I'm releasing #6 right now. And I'm working on #1 (just need to finish lettering, but it's kind of a drag because of how the orginal lettering is).