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(C97) [casis-kabosu (Aria.)] Maid na Kanojo wa Ore no Hanashi o Kikanai! (Cafe Stella to Shinigami no Chou) [English] [Crack Team Operations]

(C97) [カシスかぼす (ありあ。)] メイドな彼女は俺の話を聞かないっ! (喫茶ステラと死神の蝶) [英訳]

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Posted:2021-04-13 12:05
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:116.6 MiB
Length:22 pages
Favorited:463 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.37

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Posted on 13 April 2021, 14:45 by:   neo_skyline    PM
Score +84
Posted on 13 April 2021, 18:27 by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +25
raw: /g/1660144/c3f1bfd59a/

three things:
- raw size = 28.6MB, this one = 116.6MB?
- line spacing should be tighter
- dialogue doesn't feel like it's flowing well

otherwise, nice work for a first upload! the text cleaning and redrawing looks nice too. thanks a bunch and i hope you guys keep improving!

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