Translation: ddock17 (me)
Raw: /g/1573277/7b7f72c1bc/
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Here's Nino's part, enjoy! If I have time I'll translate Itsuki's as well :)

Pllease Ekakibit sensei make this Harem end.

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Another part, another dumb doujin.
First he invents some idiotic smell fetish for Nino, then he completely ignores her character from the manga.
I know doujins are usually dumb, but for a self-proclaimed fan of the series Ekakibit seems like he never read it.

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i agree @cbq you're absolutely right
but i think most peoples aren't searching for character-authenticity when they're reading doujins
i absolutely agree that it's a huge plus tho' when it's there

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@StratoSquir
Yeah, I know. The art and scenes are nice.
It sucks when the artist doesn't care about the character and writes dumb things like this.

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Hi, I did the re-edit.

Changes in the script were done by another TL I know who offered their suggestions after I told them what I was doing.

The raws for this one sucked ass. Lots of janky cropping and weird levelling. In fact, the text above Nino's head on page 11 is cut in half in the raw; luckily that whole page is available on Ekakibit's pixiv as part of the preview for this doujin so the TL was able to use that. Hopefully someone can give this a better scan and translation in the future. It deserves as much.

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@crimsonraes
The Korean RAW is much better quality than this one
/g/1582570/77fcc3ae0a/

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@Soyungundam
Oh, you're right. The redrawing on the KR is excellent, too. Wonderful. Kudos to their redrawer.

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