This is my first translation!

Raw: /s/165f2cd7ba/1006161-2

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Translation's kinda rough; not unreadable, but certainly affects enjoyment

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In Photoshop, when you select the Text tool, change the anti-aliasing setting from "None" to "Smooth." This will prevent it from looking like the pixelated shit you see here.

If your English isn't native-level, which it isn't, you should try to get someone who is to edit your translation as well. That will smooth out a lot of the awkwardness and prevent the basic errors.

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Well good luck

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if its from a magazine shouldnt this gallery get reclassed?

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Here's a quick proofread of the first ten pages. You may use these corrections if you plan on editing this work:

P2: "Master's penis", not "Master penis".

P3: "I'll become a dirty maid", not "I'll become dirty maid."

P4: "Master's semen", not "Master semen".

P5: "You came again?" or "You're here again?", not "You come again?"

P6: "Acts spoiled", not "act spoiled".

P7: "Why is it different", not "why it's different".
P7: "This one is specially for you" or "This is a special one for you", not "This one is special for you".

P8: "You like maids", not "You likes maids".
P8: "Has no result", not "have no result".
P8: "Got excited", not "get excited".

P9: "Are you wondering why I know you like maids?", not "Why wonder how I can know you like maid?"
P9: "Nii-san's foreskin", not "Nii-san foreskin".

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It's kinda rough not gonna lie. But I'll give you points for honest effort. Keep trying and you will get better with time and practice.

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Master penis sounds like the ultimate tier of a dildo you would use as a weapon in some porn game. Kinda like master ball in pokemon.

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I hope you can take the constructive criticism here in stride. Getting from Japanese to editable English is getting 95% of the way there, so it'll be a waste if you get discouraged.

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Hey, good on you for taking all this criticism and fixing it. This is really good now. Thanks for uploading!

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my sister never tried nearly this hard to have sex with me.

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@Red 255

The point is she tried yeah? You just gotta go with the flow and cum inside.

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PC folder instead of the "hidden porn stash under the bed"™. Nice to see hentai moving forward.

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