I am so glad that this doujin is finally getting translated after so long !!! I love this author !

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10 errors for poor grammar tag:
1 + 2. Pg 5 + 6 - Panties called pants
3. Pg 5 - Your really are
4. Pg 6 - Guy's first bubble I assume was supposed to be something like "so that's how it is"
5. Pg 7 - Should be "body and soul belong"
6. Pg 7 - Last bubble I assume is supposed to be something like "No one's going to talk unless you want them to" or maybe if she does first
7. Pg 9 - Should be "This kind of stroke" or maybe "These kinds of strokes"
8. Pg 11 - "I always imagine that when I masturbate" should be "When I masturbate, I always imagine"
9. Pg 16 - Punishment spelled wrong
10. Pg 15 - "Till" should be "'til"
There's places that should have commas and stuff too but I don't want to nitpick too much, it's still a serviceable translation

Last edited on 03 May 2021, 04:59.

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I found a place to move to

Base +6

That grip strength on page 29!

Base +6, Ahegaosensei -6, jwagne51 +7, PlayBoi Tiffany +5, kiwino +14

Art 5. Plot 5. Sexiness 5. Translation 4. All out of 10.

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