is this some kind of late April Fool's joke???

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Maybe if you barely even know English it shouldn't be the language of choice to translate something into.

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Not even the groups that are actually competent at what they do are shameless enough to slap a paypal link on the cover.

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I feel bad for whoever actually commissioned this.

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This is called a ripoff.

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Useless goddess even on translating this

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I'm not gunna hate on someone wanting to make translating a job and getting paid.

On the other hand, the typesetting and font choice need help. The translation itself is very robotic, like it was cleaned up machine trans.

Thus I recommend free practice till you're atleast up to par with the average translator before throwing up a paypal.

AND, no one likes it when a translator throws up ads on the work's pages. It's why you see a translator page added to the end.

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Disgusting.

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A shameful translation from a shameless goddess.

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people like you are the reason many artists hate fan translations.

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as shameless as fakku with about 0.01% of the competence

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not only it's shit, but also you even have ball for fucked the cover big time with your ugly-ass links

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boy am i glad you included your paypal in a big giant watermark
after reading that translation, my first thought was that you should be getting paid the big bucks for your sterling work

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Please give the guy a refund...

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So how much for stopping your translation ?

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i know Aqua is stupid goddess, but please don't bully her with your stupid translation

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For a moment I had hope. Now all I feel is disappointment and anger that this fake translation might well kill the odds of this work ever being TLed by a LEGITIMATE translation team because this fucking exists.

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WTF??? no "me so horny" liners, at least try to be funny

consider that a tip, no where's my change?

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