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Why the poor grammar tag? The typesetting is terrible but the translation itself is good.

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wouldn't call it good but it is decent enough I guess

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Here's a proofread version up to Page 12.

P06
"Something has been worrying me", not "something have".

P09
"Master" might be a better term than "owner".
"Your whole body will be the property", not "at the property".
"I'd never heard or used words like these", not "I've never heard or used words like this".

P10
"I felt like my masochistic side had woken up", not "had woke up".
"I also knew it was neither suggestion nor hypnosis", not "Also, I knew it was not suggestion or hypnosis".

P11
"I was aware of my masochistic side wanting to be dominated" or "I was aware of my masochistic side that wanted to be dominated", not "in wanting".
"Since then, I began pleasing myself every night", not "Since then, every night I was pleasing myself".
"I had to be 'dominated' for that", not "It had to be".

P12
"I can't believe // that I came here to look for a master", not "I don't belive it. // that I have come to look for an owner".
"What about another servant", not "And another servant".
"It looks like he's my only available option" might be better than "It seems that I only have him left".

Incidentally, if you're going to ask for help in proofreading the text, I recommend you do that before you actually put up the gallery. You'll get a lot more appreciation that way.

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Not the best TL, but I won't complain when fantastic works that have failed to get TL'd at all despite being out for years now finally get a tl. Thank you for the effort you put in.

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I went from 'Happy' to 'Cringe', once I started reading.

You picked a good item to share but get some help with both the translation and editing.

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