This is my first time doing these kind of thing, so if there something not good or anything else i am sorry. Thank you.

For a start, don't translate into a language you're not actually fluent in. :/

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Good work.
Only assholes will try to put your effort down by no reason. The translate works fine and ll help many ppl understand the story line.

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Nice work
Thanks for the contribution and the translation

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Here's a proofread version of the lines that needed to be fixed. You may use these if you intend to redo this gallery.

As I do not have access to the raws, please note that I had to guess the meaning of some of the phrases that made absolutely no sense at all.

P1:
"Or... a creampie" might be a better phrase than "vaginal shot". Alternatively, you can use "Or... my pussy?"

P2
There is no direct English equivalent of "skinship", but "flirting" might be a decent substitute. In this case, you can use "Our flirting grew so intense that I wasn't able to hold myself back."
Instead of "My wife couldn't stand me and my daughter so she went away", you can use "My wife couldn't accept my relationship with our daughter, so she left us."
Instead of "And me too", it might be better to use "It's the same for me".
Instead of "I can't resist pleasure from my daughter", I recommend using "I can't resist the pleasure my daughter gives me".

P3
Instead of "It's dangerous while I'm cooking", use "Doing that while I'm cooking is dangerous".
"Let's take a bath together", not "Let's come in together".

P4
"I love you, Papa" sounds better than "My love, Papa".
"As expected in a vagina" makes no sense. Perhaps he meant "You want it in your pussy?"
I'm not sure what you meant by "Came out of my body so much that...", but "I came so much that..." might be a better way of phrasing it.
"At last the last vaginal sense has disappeared" also makes no sense. Since she's talking about him cumming inside her for the first time in the next panel, he might have meant "We've finally crossed that line".
"You finally came in my pussy", not "Finally you gave me sperm in my vagina".
"Lots of children", not "lots of child".

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@meow_pao:

"As I do not have access to the raws, "???

What?

The title has the name of the anthology where this short come from, or you can click the author/artist name then click "Show Tagged Galleries"

That anthology has the same character as cover.

""As expected in a vagina" makes no sense." More like ""As expected in the vagina" It makes sense Why? Because that is the reply to her "I want it in my pussy." for his "I'm going to cum..."

The read between the line here is

Father: "I'm going to cum..." [Where should i cum, in or out May be she want it in her pussy?]
Daughter : "I want your cum in my pussy."
Father: "As expect in the pussy."

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and this gallery updated with more comprehensible english
thank you

@H0R0
RAW:/s/65366f7541/1861361-4
yes, the raw actually only can be accessed through EX

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Next time, I will be more careful...

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@H0R0:

When I said "As expected in a vagina" makes no sense, I meant it makes no sense grammatically.

I checked the raw that Larequirem was kind enough to point out, and what the sentence actually says is, "In your pussy, just as I expected." When phrased that way, it now makes sense.

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Daughter is secretly a succubus, look at his skin tone, almost no life left in him..

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