P14 "It is just construction work" or "It's just construction work", not "Its is just construction work".
P16 "Young women can charm men with their mesmerizing ability" or "using their mesmerizing ability", not "through their mesmerizing ability". "To live happily", not "to happily live".
P17 "My execution and 35 years of forced labour", not "My execution an 35 years of forced labour". "Wonderful", not "wonderfull" (unless you're trying to use the outdated version of the word).
P18 "Well then", not "Well the".
P21 "I'll keep going", not "I'll keep goin" (unless he's using the informal version of the word, in which case it should be " goin' ").
P23 "Thieves", not "thiefs". Also, shouldn't "pirates" be the more appropriate term?
P44 "Their beautiful figures", not "their beautiful figure".
P46 "All the food and supplies have been brought on board" or "have been loaded", not "have been boarded". "The stolen treasure has been loaded up" is a better term than "has been piled up". "It's time to conquer this country", not "It's time conquer this country".