My branded pfp finally got it's first doujin adaptation, how can I not?

The artstyle is pretty close to Kiasa which is quite ironic...

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That was fast. Thank you very much.

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Jesus what is this TL? Did it even go through a first round of quality review?? With all the errors I would not be shilling for patreon support with this.

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Well that was fast.

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That was fuckin fast bro.

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It's Christmas in May!

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@donkey_kong

which is much better than the anime's artstyle. the anime's wasnt too bad per se, but kiasa's is just way more superior

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Ouch, this translation. Guess that's what you get when you translate something in a day. Seriously, spend some more time and make sure things at least make grammatical sense and don't have any spelling errors, please. This is hard to read...

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Based Kouchaya for drawing best girl.

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Raw: /g/1918001/4f43fcbb27/

The translation isn't /that/ bad but the punctuation and sentence flow could really have done with some proofreading. Lots of questions missing question marks, missing periods at end of dialogue bubbles, etc.

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Eh shoulda used the less censored RAW.

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The story is good and matches well to heine's character. The art is good and a good match. The translation needs a lot of work. There are so many errors that I don't believe it was proofread. The translator has a very poor grasp of american slang. They use phrases that sound related to American slang but that are never actually said. Like a foreigner just learning English and trying to piece what few phrases they understand into something that makes sense, but lacking any experience, exposure, or historical context.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 8. Translation 3. True to character 7. All out of 10.

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