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This is part 4 of the series:

Part 1 can be found at /g/1847593/4262b17b99/
Part 2 can be found at /g/1981419/77fc99d5b1/ (Untranslated)
Part 3 can be found at /g/1981421/ac046ce5d7/ (Untranslated)
Part 5 can be found at /g/1919691/077a2da31b/
Part 6 can be found at /g/1946539/e70393bb40/
Part 7 can be found at /g/1981312/1375e9b2a7/
Part 8 can be found at /g/2018435/7ac2faff3d/
Part 9 can be found at /g/2041703/bd761e9ca2/

There's quite a number of grammatical errors here:

P2
"You called me over so suddenly", not "Suddenly called me over".
"I have something to ask you for help", not "I have something to ask you to help".
"And today is a holiday", not "And today is holiday".

P3
"So where do you need my help" or "So how can I be of help" or "So what can I help you with", not "So what do you need to help".
"When I tested the live broadcast, the screen froze" or "The screen froze just as I began to test the live broadcast", not "When I just tested the live broadcast, the screen has frozen".
"Then I remembered", not "Then I remember".
"So I think you can help me find where I went wrong" or "So I think you can help me find what went wrong", not "So I think you can help me find where wrong".
"We've known each other for" is missing something like "for so long" or "for X years".

P4
"Let's try it again", not "then back on to try it".

P5
"Just a few simple problems", not "Just a few simple problem".
"What do you want", not "what you want".
"I'll do whatever you want" is probably the correct phrase, not "As far as I can".

That's over 10 errors in just 4 pages; more than enough to qualify this gallery for the "poor grammar" tag.

EDIT: I see the "translated" tag has been taken down. If this is the author's own English version and not a third-party translation, then the "poor grammar" tag should not be used.

Last edited on 28 May 2021, 12:00.

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