Created by: chiba tetsutarou (all credits to him)
Translated by: Mant
Colored by: DRAGSXXX
I hope you enjoy my first coloring work, tell me wich one of tiba santi would you like me to color, i am working in Sasara Secret 2 maybe ending coloring in 4 monts

It is very basic colouring. I'd like to request more shading, as it is now it looks to be select area then bucket fill and leaving the work to the original art for the shading. I know there's more effort involved but the current product looks like that.

And while the focus is on the girls the background would also need to look good. For example page 7 perhaps add more darkness to the side men so that the tent opening and light spilling in, cover use two or three different green colours for grass and trees, or mix a few blues for the sky, some more splotches of brown for the ground.

Wazakita draws the line art and Shokushu-san colours it in, while Shokushu-san level is a disproportionately high goal I hope you aim for a goal like that.

Base +13, somerandomdude33 +7, neo_skyline +23, sora21345 +7