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The English is pretty good. No noticeable mistakes or awkwardness.

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HInata knows waht she wnats and that is making Love with her Husband and Naruto loves HInata more than his own live

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Sad. Very bland expressions and Hinata's face just looks busted.

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dude, in that form, he could have burst hinata open when he stick his PP in

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I bet the last page is turn out to be Boruto's Dad telling Boruto the story of the night Boruto was conceived.

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