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[581] Cool Bishoujo Remodeling Ch13・Program Correction Edition [English]

[581]【13】クール美少女改造・プログラム修正編 [英訳]

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Posted:2021-07-21 06:36
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Language:English  TR
File Size:6.25 MiB
Length:4 pages
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Posted on 21 July 2021, 06:36 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
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The artist's pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/49287
The artist's skeb: https://skeb.jp/@hokan185
Original work: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/91184282

Please support the artist (581(ごはい)) if you can. This is also requested by けー. Please support him too. https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1133210

I used DeepL etc. to translate this while making sure it is coherent and keeping to the original work. Please, if there's any corrections I need to make, tell me and I'll verify and change it. p2, 音声 was voice,audio or sound. p3, みんあ今日もよるしくね I used an idolmaster song lyric to translate this. if there's anything better, I'll change it.

Chapter 1-4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Posted on 21 July 2021, 11:27 by:   Kurisu_Makise    PM
Score +31
Thank you for translating these, but seeing as they're so short and all seemingly related isn't it better to create a single gallery and update it? Idk what the uploading rules are like here though so don't mind me if not. Thanks again.
Posted on 21 July 2021, 12:45 by:   Ficfactor    PM
Score +31
Just want to reiterate how much it's appreciated that you translate and upload these.
Posted on 21 July 2021, 15:40 by:   Supeskupes    PM
Score +29
These are always so creepy. They way that she can switch from from mimicing her old human life to souless machine is so jarring. And her twitching and grasping her fingers while strapped down was so unsettling.
Posted on 21 July 2021, 20:57 by:   Ez-Burning    PM
Score +20
Are the brains also mechanical in the end ? If so, why abduct girls at all ?
Posted on 22 July 2021, 00:30 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +7
@Ez-Burning: Probably. But the point of them getting abducted and mechanized is to produce a sex cyborg that can please their masters while keep improving since it's implied in that world, AI tech isn't advanced enough to just simply make a learning sexbot. Plus their living organs should fetch an amazing price in the black market and some sick bastards get off to having those girls' original personality activated during sex, confusing and horrifying the girls in their new body.
Posted on 22 July 2021, 03:03 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +13
@Ez-Burning

In the middle of page 2, you can't see what's behind the metal thing when it's open. from the request, it seems the requester said that the artist didn't need to draw the "gross depictions like the raw brain". here's the relevant part of what the requester asked for(生々しい脳を大きくはっきり見せるといった露骨なグロ描写・構図は無しで構いません)so if this was translated properly, It's not clear if they removed the brain entirely and transferred the data to a computer etc and put it in the body or what's under the metal thing is a brain or not. Otherwise, it's the former.

It's not canon or anything but I'd like to think that they use real humans because making it out of robot would make it look too "uncanny valley" and is a "boner killer" and making it out of people removes that.

@ Kurisu_Makise

I don't know either. If I put all of them in one gallery (to chapter 1-4 for example), do I have to delete the other ones? In 1-4, I have the separate chapters linked in the description (in bold next to the pixiv links). Do I have to change them every time I update i.e. does the link to the image change? I'm also worried about the bump limit.
Last edited on 22 July 2021, 03:23.
Posted on 27 July 2021, 18:18 by:   Stem Cell    PM
Score +10
I'm ok with these being in separate galleries, if the artist starts doing something else all the existing galleries can be joined into one big (separate) gallery.
Posted on 28 July 2021, 09:37 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +7
@Stem Cell
I've been pondering on whether or not to merge them to the first gallery, but I guess I can keep them separate. Although I really think it would have been a better idea to have 12 and 13 together, seeing that they were both posted on the same date and 13 being too short. eh... too late for that I guess.

This whole story/ thing is requested by けー so I guess it's up to him (and the artist) when to end it. His pixiv is https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1133210 if you wanted to know. He's made a lot of requests from the artist and written the story for Summer Bug.
Posted on 09 September 2021, 14:48 by:   gguy123    PM
Score +10
-sorry, wrong gallery-
Posted on 26 May 2024, 21:40 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +39
>I used DeepL etc
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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