Thank you AkanameTL for the Translation
I have a mission to get as many Akatsuki works translated as possible and theirs 20+ of them so...wish me luck.
if any one wants to help leave a comment or leave a private message.

Gotta love that thick ass woman!!!

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Translated Akatsuki souken (Blonde sleeping girl with a shota) please.

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Is this a real translation? The lord / god / Christianity stuff feels weird, I mean I know they have a few christians in Japan but still.

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@Ronnie42 the man is back!

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One of the most boring ones you could've translated, but at least you're translating them

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Lol yea this reads like a re-write. I wonder if anybody who knows Japanese can read the original to confirm.

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@HUxSOLDIER I mean yeah, it's pretty simple, but I enjoy any AS work where the woman has them big ol' expressive eyes. He typically draws anyone over the age of 18 with very narrow eyes, or at the very least the milfs and such have their eyes narrow the sluttier they get, but he draws fantastic expressions with bigger eyes. Just look at page 9, page 16, and page 22 and tell me you want the eyes so narrow they always show the same expression like normal.

As for the translation, the dlsite description says she's a devout christian and a foreigner, so that's probably accurate. I mean do you see her name? I imagine the dude wanted to write a story with a bunch of christian related dialogue for fun.

EDIT: You know, that's fair. I agree they do look very sultry and lewd, I'm just saying that's what he does 90% of the time. As I've stated I think he does amazing big, expressive eyes as well and I love when he does them. They're both good, one is just done far too rarely.

Last edited on 02 August 2021, 02:28.

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The "narrow eyes" is the selling point for me. He does great sultry expression with them.

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excellent work, great translation - thanks for sharing with the community

I hope to see more translated works of this great artist

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