translation made by me: yunam
I used google translate and the corean translation made by team Demer@s
if you like it let me know

the doujin was originally made by Oving, i do not own any of the characters in here.

>Get excited for Obui Mai Shiranui tiddies
>"I used google translate and the corean translation"
>My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.jpeg

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I agree, that is disappointing.
The only hope that I have is that an actual translator group
Gets so horrified that decides to do it themselves
A man can only dream

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Hey some tips i can give if you wanna have a decent context of the story. https://www.deepl.com/translator and then when u try to translate something u can click on the translated words and it will come with suggestions of what it could mean. It's a good way to at least have some context in the story. and you can use Qtranslate to scan the words from the images.

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Well, at least the guy was honest enough as to confess it, today there are more than an uploader who think that just because they know how to use a couple of translators, that acredit them to do a publication, and you don't notice the real quality of their work unless you know japanese or read carefully their edition.

Edit: There will be a next time!? Man, if something is clear with this try of you of publish an english edition is that you need a lot of practice with language and edition before publish something again.

Last edited on 31 July 2021, 02:25.

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c'mon there was a whole website i could have use to help me?
i'll keep it in mind next time, thanks.the biggest problem was to keep the story consistent, since most of the times i had lose kanjis that just returned one word that made no sense in the context.and i basically had to kinda create my own version i guess? i did try to keep it as close as i could to the original though.
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yeah, i wasnt even gonna upload it but it took so much time that i said "fuck it this shit hasnt been translated in 5 years, whats the worse that could happen"

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Well, I want to thank you for at least putting something and uploading it. I want you to know that someone is grateful for your effort to upload some good obui in English.

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Btw i have also considered to try translate some of my favorite works primary NF tagged. but i was wondering what is a good way to fit in text in the speech bubbles etc?.

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Thanks for the kind words. I really appreciate it
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You should give it a go, I used Photoshop with the dropper and brusher tool to cover the og text and then just type the new one over it. The font for Mai in particular I think fits really well. It's the Kristen ITC font. As you can probably see I discovered it halfway through and was too lazy to change it in the first pages xD
Also, this doujin specifically didn't have floating dialogue which could have been a nightmare to translate

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I know i'm a lazy reader but i gotta say your work was pretty impressive, i didnt notice it was machine translated until i read the comments, and you had the decency of stating it beforehand. Keep up the good work!
Could use a better font though

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There's only 1 page that includes pregnant sex. The rest is stomach inflation.

Pregnant tag should be removed.

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Great job, great translation - thanks for sharing it with the community

waiting for new translations of other works by this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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This really isn't that bad, sure it could be better, but it is readable to say the least. Just keep in mind all the constructive comments if you ever decide to translate a new one.

Seriously now, I really don't get those saying this is dissapointing. The story in general lacks, just like in most doujinshis, so a few mistakes here and there aren't gonna change much anyway, and even so you can still understand what happened and the context behind things. It is just another shitty "i'm gonna inject a weird drug in your tits" story.

The only thing I'm truly annoyed with is the font used in some parts.

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Obui knows to deliver female suffering and its glorious

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The font burns my eye sockets.

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thank you for the translation :D very kind of you

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>I used google translate and the corean translation made by team Demer@s
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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