Well, this is new.

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Strange but cute!

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Imagine being so bad at bing a tentacle monster that you rape and swallow someone and somehow you end up getting pushed down and topped by them.

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None of these errors are present anymore, only a few minor ones, so feel free to retract the misc:"poor grammar" tag, anyone that voted on it.

Last edited on 07 August 2021, 01:36.

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I like that I can at least understand the flow of the story with this translation. I've seen others attempt these sorts of three-language translations and fail miserably, so I think what you did is passable. The grammatical mistakes danielwain pointed out are important to take note of, however.

Also really enjoying what's going on in this doujin, so I'm glad it got translated either way.

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I rather wouldn't have given it the misc:"poor grammar" tag, there are a lot of stories that are more deserving of that. As @scrump80 pointed out, you could follow the story just fine, in spite of most of these minor errors. Still, that's at least 10 errors over 33 pages, there are some points that might be up to discussion or wrong on my end, but it still more than satisfies the 10 errors per 40 pages, regrettably. Translate it into English is actually right, for example. Feel free to correct any other errors I overlooked or made with the correction myself.

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Raw Chinese Chinese2 Korean French >English<
Thanks for sharing this.

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@danielwain Hello thank you a lot for your precious help. It should be OK now thanks to your help. You can found the new version here: /g/1977705/a8eec5a10f/

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Hmm. I'd rather have seen this with older characters, but the story is fantastic! Thanks for the translation.

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Stuff like this is why I tend to not blacklist tags. This probably should be tagged as Vore for obvious reasons, but if I blacklisted Vore I wouldn't get to see something this nice.

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Seeing a gallery with misc:"poor grammar" fixed is a rare pleasure. Thanks a bunch!

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@ P-dog
My advice if you don't like to block tags is to use the blacklist to colour the Tags you dislike and not block them,
that way it's easier to see the tags you don't like and they don't take you by surprise.
If you dislike something it will get to you more if it takes you by surprise.

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我不能接受这个，，，

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I think this is oddly cute, especially the next to last page.

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The lack of a continuation is a crime against humanity. How am I supposed to live not knowing what happens next to this cute couple.

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挺好的，这种也算百合吧

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