very nice, thanks for the translation

Base +13, Not Benedict +6

Okay, now that you can typeset on a level that doesn't make want to wash my eyes with sulfuric acid to unsee it, I think that it's time for you to learn on how to download the full resolution images and stop making the rookie mistake of using e-hentai's downscaled 1280px horizontal resolution for editing.

Step 0) Stay away from aggregator sites like nh because they mostly just copy the 1280px res images from this site and don't bother to download the original size versions.

You can download the full resolution images via one of the following methods:
1. Torrent download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the fulll resolution version of a gallery. Torrents for downscaled versions normally have a 1280x in their name)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (in case you prefer to download image by image or you don't want to download an entire gallery

RAW: /g/1319115/198a296a44/

Base +18, rento1243966131 +6, DankMemes42069 +17, JukanX +25, Not Benedict +6, zeck123 +7, ijkjlj +14, as102 +11, JumpingJellybeans +6, Xakep +22

Oh baby more Inoue Yoshihisa, one of the best shibari artists out there! New translated works of his is always a happy day for me, thanks!

Base +14, CrowKarasu +14, Matstest +7

@Ancient-Alien I certainly didn't know that. Will definitely try on my next next upload. Thanks!

Base +2, Kaibun -6, reverse1802 +13

noice, a small joy in a shitty life

Base +3

@shaddy746

Please read up on this website to improve your overall editing: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/.

In addition to learning how to get full-size scans, you also need to learn how to level scans, increase your font size in certain parts adjust your text boxes to fit your text better in certain bubbles (which I'll explain next sentence), resize your images so that your fonts aren't humongous on a 14 or 16 pt font setting, center your text better, and absolutely positively avoid vertical aligned text (unless there's no other way to typeset in certain thin bubbles). Oh by the way, until you can consistently provide a quality product, please don't ask for commissions and certainly don't ask people to donate to your Patreon, Paypal, or whatever else you're shilling, because I've pointed out a whole lot of problems that if I saw them in a work that I paid for, I'd demand my money back. Stop asking people to "consider" donating to you until you can consistently deliver a quality product that isn't rife with issues. If you want to see examples of people I'd pay to commission, look at works done by RedLantern and White Symphony. Once your works approach their level of quality, THEN you can start asking for money.

Now onto the main problem with your work: your text boxes. I notice that a fair amount of your bubbles are off-center because of how you position your text boxes and because of that, you crowd the sides of bubbles. My general rule-of-thumb for typesetting is to create a text box that encompasses the majority of the bubble, input the text, and manually adjust said text inside to make it fit into the bubble better by adjusting my font size and pressing Enter to create new line breaks to better fit my text. I'll go a step further and re-typeset one of your pages to show you how the page is supposed to look like.

Using page 21 in this gallery as an example, you can see that just by improving the typesetting and nothing else, your project looks at least 10 times better than before.
Re-typeset page: https://puu.sh/I5qty/d90ff56fed.png

Notice how all the fonts are centered, properly-sized, and don't crowd the bubbles they're in? That exemplifies good typesetting. I'll even post my typeset without my cleaning layer to show you exactly where my typeset overlaps yours to prove that your fonts aren't properly centered for the most part: https://puu.sh/I5qtN/c9345d75bf.png.

One other thing of note, you need to adjust your image size, because when I wanted to typeset this page, a 12 size font almost took up the entire bubble. To do so (assuming you use Photoshop), on the top menu, select "Image", then "Image Size", and finally "resolution" to a more manageable size WITHOUT resampling the image. In this case, your image resolution was a whopping 600, so I adjusted it to 100 and my font sizes were a lot more manageable so you don't use decimal point font sizes like 1.6 or 4.2.

Last edited on 21 August 2021, 01:35.

Base +28, as102 +11, JumpingJellybeans +6, Xakep +22, a2764427270 -6, solowing -7

@THDragon I thought my typesetting was centered eenough until I saw yours. Thanks for pointing it out. Yours definitely looks more presentable. I am using GIMP. Maybe if I get enough support, I'll get Photoshop.

Base +2