Sorry for the long wait.
I was stuck on the wordiness of some stuff...
Please let me know if you find any mistakes.

I am planning on working on another one futa peco x kyaru.

Edit: Added a page I missed and converted to PNG for smaller file size. (TY @AriesWarlock)
Edit 2: Corrections and an attempt at making some things sound less awkward. (TY @Nomake Wan)
Edit 3: Some typos and corrections, specifically pg 19 (TY @Nimnthor) This will be my last change for at least 30 days. I'm sorry about all the mistakes I should've caught.

RAW: /g/1901273/e7285cc488/

Thank you for the translation @tabibit0! Was waiting for this one.

I'd suggest you convert the black and white images to .PNG format please since as .JPG format they are too large in file size. The raw is 70MB, your gallery is 226MB. Check out this guide:

https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/post/png.html

https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/how-to-edit-manga-with-photoshop/rawr/editguide/3.html

edit Thanks @tabibit0. Take your 5 stars!

Last edited on 24 August 2021, 12:15.

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Thanks for the translation! I've wanted to work on translating some of Kuroko's works myself.

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Nothing hotter than a girl growing a dick and tenting her panties.
If such a mushroom existed, I'm sure pharmaceutical companies would be grinding it up to put in pill form.

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Oh hell yeah, I'd been wishing someone would translate this group's futa stuff. <3 peco x kyaru, and the other ones are pretty good too.

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"There isn't one shred of lesbianism in this."

That's a really philosophical statement. Is yuri no longer yuri once one of the girls grows a dick?

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@Pony^4
Actually, on pixiv and other nip sites futanari is still counted as yuri.

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@AriesWarlock
Gotcha, I usually just export whatever the source. Thanks for the advice.

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Raw: /g/1901273/e7285cc488/
Raw (scan): /g/1415760/c7e3b25493/
Korean (scan): /g/1416064/aa002b14f3/
English: /g/1992221/4f0b86a8e9/ (here)

Thanks for translating this.

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Stilted TL is stilted and incorrect in a few spots. On just the first page:

"Wait, Pecorine!"
Actually, this isn't 'wait', it's 'hey'. She's not telling Pecorine to wait, she's admonishing her for having gotten them lost.

"I'll never make it to town!"
Wrong. "We still haven't made it to town yet!?"

"And I got separated from Korosuke!"
Actually the author wrote "Korosuke and the others," quite explicitly (コロ助達).

"It's like I'm on a date with Kyaru-chan and I'm having fun?"
You tried too hard to use the literal text from the JP when it doesn't work in English. If you want to keep the question mark, "But being alone with you is like we're out on a date, Kyaru-chan, so I'm enjoying myself you know?" Otherwise drop the "you know?" and use an exclamation mark instead.

I don't know enough about PriConne to actually QC this whole book, which is exactly why I wouldn't attempt to translate it myself. Japanese is a context-based language, so without knowing all the quirks of the series I'd just produce something stilted. But the above issues are mostly basic Japanese grammar mistakes and the failure on the translator's part to produce proper English, neither of which require knowledge of the series in question to get right. I see you've been doing this since 2018...and your galleries generally have the same sentiments. Are you machine translating? Or what's up?

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Thanks for the corrections. I have some college experience with Japanese, so I do have to look-up kanji. I am not advanced enough to where I can really expand upon my rigid translations. I'll change the mistakes you pointed out ASAP. As for "Korosuke and the others," there's usually just 4 of them so I wasn't sure how to go about that but I'll just change it since it is explicitly stated.

Also I leave out some things because I can't properly fit it in and it doesn't seem to add much from my opinion.
Also Kyaru ending almost everything with "jyanai" I summed up as an accent thing.

Last edited on 25 August 2021, 06:47.

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"That's a really philosophical statement. Is yuri no longer yuri once one of the girls grows a dick?"

Considering it was originally devised as a hentai genre to make girl on girl sex work, yes, it very much still is.
And that's not even a joke. That's literally its origin as a hentai genre.
Just like how loli and shota hentai was originally devised as a way to circumvent censorship.

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@sleazeball
It can be, but not necessarily. "Futa yuri" is basically romantic futa/futa or futa/girl, with "yuri" referring to the girl-on-girl romance aspect independent of how they engage in sex. Whereas pure fapbait futa without a bit of romance wouldn't get called yuri.

Although I have to question the translation on that line anyway, looking at the raw I'm pretty sure Kyaru is trying to insist that she isn't a dyke, not that they're not engaging in lesbian sex

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Crap... Looking over it you're probably right @Nimnthor. I'd change it again but I'm limited to 2 changes a month sorry....

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@tabibit0: Thanks for the explanation. I didn't know they were a group of 4--this is exactly what I meant when I said I wouldn't be able to properly QC a PriConne book. If there's only 4 of them and she says コロ助達 then the way to do it correctly would be to say "Korosuke and {name of 4th person}."

Good looking out, best of luck with your Japanese education!

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