why did you remove the credit page of original colorer(is this a real word)? and you can see the non-color part around the text box in pg 13, it's inconspicuous in other places, all in all it's okay but you could have made it great with a little more effort cutting and pasting the translation
Is it just me or is /s/cd442e5ba8/1996329-10 broken for anybody else? Like it seems like the file itself is partly corrupted.... YEP! The web version seems to be corrupted, but the archive is correct. Weird.
If she can't even defeat a few simple undead, then how is she an adventurer warrior? She wouldn't even make it that far with such weak body. Either be much, much stronger or don't take tasks too hard for yourself. I would rather see her defeat all of them and win.