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What's the reason for the Ws in Kuroi's speech, starting from page 10?

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@anymon I'm assuming he's putting on a cutesy lisp similar to how a child talks

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@ S-One

It's strange that the 2d-market translation is doing it now when it was not done in the previous doujins.

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I was hoping he'd get to use his dick for once or a DP.

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Wait, a real woman is in the middle of it? Now it's gay.

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Man i kind of hope somebody makes a version without that wierd W speech thing. It makes everything so hard to read. It's like someone uwu-ified kuroi's dialogue for no reason.

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looking at the original script a bit, the lisp was def way overdone here. some sentences in the original had no lisp at all. i think it's a hard call to make as translator, if a character should be phasing in out of melty mode depending on what's happening to them, or if they take on that mode entirely after the onset. in this case though, it's really distracting and most likely wasn't the way to go.

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that baby speak thing is really fucking annoying to wead

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Anyone care to make it more clear what order these are?

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I love how the artist just keeps doubling down on how pathetic Kuro is. The whole story you're expecting some kind of turn around where she's like "Yeah Kuro's pathetic, but he's still my favorite fuck hole" or something along those lines. Like in the previous story he at least got a moment where Donbe admits she missed getting to fuck his ass, but now he's so used and busted he doesn't even have that edge anymore.

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Well that's what happened when Kuro goes from Donbe's slut to EVERYONE"S slut

I miss that favorite fuck hole mechanic they used to have

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Good translation except for the uwu speak. It was a constant boner killer. You shouldn't use it ever again, please and thank you.

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Too much female, not enough male gettin it

And yeah the dumb baby speak is terrible someone should just edit this and take all the w's out and repost it so we have a decent version up

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A wise artist once said. Girls, futanaris, traps, boys... everything's a fair game as long as they look hot.

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We need a version without the uwu speech or at least significantly toned down. I'd get it if he only spoke that way out loud to show how affected he was, but his thoughts too? That's way too far. This is painful to read.

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can't believe people are paying and getting PAID on a "professional" level for these kinds of translations

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Kuroi's got a pretty big dick...

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ENG: /g/2000267/402760b0b1/ (you are here)
KOR: /g/1905241/f544b7f9f1/
CHN: /g/1942708/23c9a01233/
RUS: /g/2011499/1b41431f57/

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There is no reason for the cute speak to be there when it's her thoughts.

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the uwu spweak is pwetty annowing

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Man, reading the uwu speak just makes me imagine Kuroi with a thick Brooklyn accent.

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Seems like he does speak like that in the raw, but certain phonetic accents are annoying as fuck to read and baby speak is one of them.

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Kept making me think of Homestar Runner with all the gratuitous Ws.

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the translation is garbage but i hope to see more of that Aoi

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