Commissioned by ExhumedCadaver

https://desudesu.mangadex.com/
https://www.patreon.com/desudesu
Email me at desudesu2[at]gmail.com for commissions!

So. Does anyone know if it was well received for a sequel?

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Raw: /g/1948778/91647a7bb1/
Chinese: /g/1967258/f106f0a774/
English: /g/2002593/833d6fb068/ (You are here)

Thanks for uploading this!

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Great work
Thanks to the commissioner and translator
Please purchase the work and support the artist
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ333576.html
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_206179/

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@Letmeinjoe09
well let's talk about sales point

this doujinshi(swinging themed) https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ333576.html
sales 381

his cg(harem theme) /g/1836447/a8a9272dad/
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ315651.html
sales 4,087

either this doujin not sell enough because it still "new" or his fan actually not like this

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With these sales I doubt it has part 2
If he's only sold this so far, it won't go up much more than 400 (sales failure of his work)

There had to be a continuation of his work
It was his best work so far https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ247472.html

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@Larequirem thanks for the info

@MacacoLendario I think he said in the pink haired girl ntr work that he won't make a sequel for that one because he doesn't know how to write a story now that the husband knows about the affair

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would be nice if it doesnt turn into another cliched NTR if he makes a sequel, NTR is not as spicy anymore unlike way back.

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It's a damn shame there was hardly anything with the other lady.

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>draws a doujin with Swapping as theme
>admits he omitted the swapping
That's why it's called bait and switch NTR. Use a theme to start kick a work and totally discard it right away for NTR.

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Hope you guys enjoy. I commissioned this mostly because Aburi is a somewhat obscure artist, with only a few works and slow updates overall. This was a bit lukewarm to be honest, but there you go.

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@Larequirem

Is it really fair to compare a 50 pages b&w doujinshi vs a 200+ page full color cg set?

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>They say bad sex leads to divorce.
>Solution: I know a guy who is great in bed and if you pay him he would have sex with your wife while you watch so you could learn to have good sex.
>Hmm, that sounds like a good idea. I mean, what could possibly go wrong?

I think the MC's friend secretly hates him.

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Though chances are slim, would definitely like to see a sequel to this.

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Like the art but the author fails badly at NTR and swapping stories. Yes yes plot in porn but if you can't make it slightly interesting then doesn't matter how good the art is. It's telling that the harem CGI sold 10 times more. It's easy to do a harem and just let girls go full hentai logic cause you pick it up not caring. But you gotta be able to write the plot for NTR for it to be interesting beyond shit hentai logic.
Author should try a couple vanilla stories. You can bend the rules far more and have it come across decent.
Really this thing just ends up miserable, any sort of sequel is just the wife praising the other guy after falling to sex and the husband rotting away or killing himself. Just depressing.

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@ sonictmp The whole point of NTR is to be depressing though, so your wall of text is pretty much meaningless muttering.

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@bergil Stop being a moron. You've obviously never played a real NTR VN. The point of NTR is to see the corruption and fall of the girl in various way. In this manga's case it's a false swinging setup that was got dropped into poor cheating/NTR that just became sad to read. I'm sorry you have low standards.

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@sonictmp Were you born retarded or have you perfected being one in your lifetime?

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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@bergil yes yes i understand your a blithering idiot who doesn't understand the basics. try keeping your mouth shut instead and learning before you speak again.

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@sonictmp Said the grammatically inept retard who doesn't know the difference between your and you're. Maybe you should take your own advice and learn some grammar before you speak again.

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Bruh, how could it be physically possible for a guy to be unable to make his wife cum even once for FIVE years, when he's supposedly actually trying to make her feel good? Like, did she never masturbate in her life to the point of orgasm and was she unable to explain what works for her? My brain wants to refuse to accept that such a situation could possibly exist... Also, apparently the guy has trouble cumming too? Wut?

There's bad at sex... and then there's whatever this is...

Oh well, at least the art is hot and all that jazz. Just gotta turn the good ol' brain off to enjoy it.

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