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Great artwork, and lovey sex scenes. I like those tanlines a lot!

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Kinda cheered for the girl when the MC asked her to go back to the way she was, and she just said 'no I like who I am, quit bugging me'. Like I just can't feel sorry for the guy, he should take the other girl's advice and actually try with other girls.

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I'm the only one that can't have sex

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Still the most malicious story to be told second only to shindol metamorphisis.

@me111
I cant really agree with that. Especially when you have context that he is abused in some form and, that in turn affects his confidence which takes time to grow. Anybody who says otherwise is lying.

Last edited on 20 September 2021, 03:06.

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I felt bad for the MC in book 1... but after that it's like, either they were the kind of girls that immediately jumped into bed with guys before, or they are now, but either way, find some other girl and DON'T BRING HER HOME EVER. Because even if he could convince one of the two to be with him, all that would happen is she'd compare him to his brother and find him lacking, then go back to the brother. See, the key is to find a girl who ISN'T happily banging your brother in the next room.

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read this, read the 1st part, read this again
nope, still can't give a fuck to MC...

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I expect the only tag for part 3 to be guro.

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"MC" acts like some kind of loser incel. He doesn't deserve any sympathy

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The funny thing is the sex scene is pretty vanilla, just a normal lovey dovey sex. The girls itself doesn't have much emotional attachment to McCuck here.
But just by inserting this cuck in between and it becomes this depressing ntr story.
You can just cut the part with the cuck and change some dialogue and it just a story about two couple who have a gangbang at the end.
or just a story about girls who exploring her sexuality (the black haired girl.)

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My two cent on this story is that he should have a more bittersweet ending than this one (like the last story of seto yuuki). I mean ok his passive behaviour is partly the root cause of his situation. But author should cut him some slack. He clearly was on an abusive family and leaving the house was a good decision. Here, the ending is kinda making feel like the whole world is against him, which is quite dumb storywise.

Last edited on 20 September 2021, 10:20.

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@Bay K.W Arde
That's how a lot of NTR seems to work this way, fundamentally they are a vanilla story with a shitty NTR skin over it so more people would buy/read it.

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It's a cleaner break than i thought, MC did need to move away from his brothers but recovery doesn't seem to be in his future as far as this ending goes.

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the inept mc got what he deserve

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The art is amazing! Story on the other hands is meh. Is NTR heading to the girl just being "close" to the cuck then gets "stolen"? This type of setting seems to be on the rise for NTR doujins.

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@kaneki117
I disagree that adding an NTR tag would make more people buy or read a doujin. NTR is a very niche fetish on its own, then factor in the extreme hate that most people have towards stories that have it. I can think of very few situations where a story would get more people to buy or read just by adding a protagonist into the story that gets NTR'd. It's much more likely to cause a more general or vanilla audience to avoid it completely, even if the NTR elements are fairly minor.

That being said, that's not really fair in this case specifically because the MC, the love interests, and the guys 'stealing' the girls are all so unlikable and the sexual situations so vanilla that I think that in this specific case you may be right that the NTR tag brought in more viewers simply because the base story is so vanilla, even with the swinging.

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So far for hoping a gym junkie ending.

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I don't really like the tag ntr but, in this case the art and the sez scenes are good and of course !Swinging! *five stars*.

Base +6, Why_Not212 -7, kiwino -13, paizurininja -6, elvendrunk -11

I see a lot of hate for the MC in the comments and I disagree partly.
He's a little bitch, but the girls are obviously being used merely for sex, this was made especially apparent during the swapping. Like c'mon at that point you should realize the dude doesn't care for you and just likes you for your body.
That's fine if it's done by choice, but don't act like you're in an actual relationship with a future.

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most realistic doujin ive ever read. love how nobody shows any pity for the incel loser

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mc is a loser no doubt about that, but Honda who makes "grown-up" speeches but in the end is just a bitch who likes the c ***

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Part 1: /g/1761108/cb8909e9fe/

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@me111
The guy was a complete cuck, but why would you cheer for the girl there? She was a complete trashy bitch. Kido had been her friend and she was pissing all over him. What he said was not words from a complete stranger, they were from somebody that knew her before she became a whore. He wasn't even saying she should stop dating his brother, he just told her that he liked her how she used to be and that there was no need for her to change, That she was good the way she had always been. The bitch knew that he liked her and that he wasn't saying he thought she was bad. She pretended she was offended though because it was easier for her to just blow him off an not take any responsibility for what she had done.

In a sequel to this she even mentions this to some other guy (that fucks her) and it is shown that she knew what she was doing. Then she pretends to be a virgin to get that other guy.

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The MC is just a vanillafag that happened to tangle with two whores who used him like a stepping stone to fuck his brothers. But thats ntr for you

Base +6, 44inf -6, elvendrunk -11

God, I wish the mc had at least a little bit of integrity to express his feelings directly about what they have done. shitty of them to just freeze out their friend like that? or maybe i got it wrong and they werent on that friendly terms.

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The MC don't deserve those sluts.

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And that’s why losers keep throwing bullets in high school

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