Posted on 09 September 2021, 19:33 by: janusmaxwell
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Something of a reshoot of one of my favorite scenes from the classic VIPER series of H-Games, in this case VIPER CTR. To those who know of the game and the plot of the scene, this is going to seem old hat because I'm trying to keep to the ROUGHLY the same plot. I won't be keeping ALL the dialogue a mirror image though, since I had IDEAS for this comic and there will be some adjusting involved, along with other shenanigans. Case in point, Miki swallowing rather than switching to paizuri.
Shoutout to JG from the VIPER digital museum for giving me a heads-up that Miki and the MC from the game are STEP-cousins through marriage. The first draft of dialogue felt a lot cringier to me even though I was keeping it accurate, so that was a life-saving piece of information.
Update 1/19/21: Finally getting this out, dialogue took me awhile because of an idea I had which wouldn't leave me alone and deviated from the actual scene in the CTR game. If I hadn't done that, this update would only be two pages and basically just a copy-paste from the game, so yay for more fap material? Anyway, enjoy, next update will be sooner rather than later, I hope.
Also, if the text looks different than other comics by arabatos, it's because I put the speech/thought bubbles, dialogue, and sound effects in myself. I figured it would be way easier for him if I handled that part, especially so I wouldn't contact him about making 2-3 rewrites because I changed the dialogue or made a typo...that happened for pages 3 and 4 of the A Sister's Advice comic and I was really embarrassed about it.
UPDATE 9/9/2121: Pages 8, 9, and 10 are here. And with this, the canonical game scene this comic is based on ends, and whatever happens next is going to be up to my imagination. TREMBLE IN FEAR BEFORE ME!!!