This was our first book we have translated almost a year ago. Since then we have worked on another 8 books which will soon be posted as well. We have gotten more members and experience since this book was done, however any and all feedback is appreciated so feel free to share.

Anyways, this version is different from the current English Translation which is missing a couple of pages.
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Original raw upload: /g/1278270/e394bab52d/
Chinese version with the missing pages included: /g/1279173/6cd0f3d47a/

Translator: WhiteKnight
Typesetting: WhiteKnight
Quality Check: The Lonely 7
Proofreading: The Lonely 7

Shamelessly copied comment from klermun:

Thanks for translating this. Unfortunately you fell for the newbie trap and used the 1280x resolution resample pages for editing instead of the original raw which is around ~2461 x 3545. For gallery viewing, e-hentai downsamples all images to 1280x resolution so if you downloaded the pages without using the original source link, you got the reduced version instead.

Another possibility is that you downloaded the raw from one of the aggregator sites such as NH. These sites only copy galleries from e-hentai at resample quality and thus don't have the original resolution versions available. You shouldn't use these sites as a source for your raws.

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

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haha, I was expecting some comment like this actually.

We'll make sure to do better on the coming translations, however the same issue might be seen in the coming 8 translations as we haven't uploaded on here before and they are already complete.

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Eno draws some of the finest asses in hentai.

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Small detail, but you left the Chinese afterword in.

And since you guys are asking for feedback so readily, I shall give it. I do wanna say that you guys have done a good job, but my expectations are exceedingly low nowadays. Most of the shit I'm gonna say is nitpicks as I don't see any major shortcomings.

1. Thanks for redrawing the backgrounds, but sometimes it's obvious your re-drawer is using the clone tool a bit liberally and leaves bizarre blotches instead of actually re-drawing (ex: p.14 - the chest at the top is filled in with the pattern, but the lines aren't redrawn and the shading isn't either. Big blotch of white to the left: "I'll go mad...")

2. Your typesetting is awkward and amateurish, stylistically. It does the job, but you can do so much better. Here's probably the best guide available: https://web.archive.org/web/20150408105241/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?3308-Typesetting-introduction

3. Punctuation. Please don't overlook this. Periods and capitalization still matter in porn.

That's it. Best of luck.

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