This one took a while, it's such a long one. Anyway have fun ya degenerates.

Thanks for the translation as always.

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Page 25: My -> Me
Page 32: Messaging -> Massaging
Page 38: Wriggling -> Wriggled
Page 39: Sucking -> Breathing
Page 50: You -> Your
Page 55: "All made clear" means learning knowledge. Not the intended poison removal.
Page 61: "UES" is not a word.
Page 102: At -> And
Page 107: Our -> Your
Page 130: I can't seem to parse the sentence beginning with "Alright".
Page 137: Smell -> Smelly, Stick -> Sticky
Page 142: Here -> Her. Also a missing space.
Page 143: Pick -> Picked
Page 145: Kids -> Kid is and Kid's.
Page 156: "That he is standing" or "him standing"
Page 161: Perhaps a "THAT" before the "you"?
Page 167: Turns -> Turned
Page 190: Will -> Would
Page 198: Have -> Are
Page 212: The edge of the text is just barely outside the page.
Page 213: Thieve's -> Thieves'
Page 216: I'll -> I'd. Also "Stand on ceremony"?
Page 220: Thumb -> Thumbs
Page 246: "Walls of fleshy" is quite strange.
Page 253: A -> An
Page 259: Missing space

Bit of a pity that you didn't translate the status screen labels everywhere.

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Great job on this, thanks for the translation!

Base +6

I appreciate the translation but you murdered it. You could've gotten the textless version and slapped your translations on it instead of plastering boxes that takes up a third of the image.

Base +6, ZheWatcher +6

@striker021 check the raws on the site, the artist only makes textless versions for the sex scenes, all the dialogue-only images don't have it.

Base +7

Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

Base +8

If I'm perfectly honest, I do all the translating, blocking out, etc myself and honestly, it annoys me when I post something which took a lot of work on and some people's first instinct is "oh thanks but-" you should've done XYZ. Translating is a lot of work, and I am no professional at it. It is honestly getting quite demoralizing, and I am considering stopping translations because of it. I'm sure you guys can do it better.

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can't she be reversed raped mind broken? or is she the perfect rape target now cuz you can't break her reason?Oo OMG I JUST LOOK HOLE ON ALL THOSE MIND BREAK/CORRUPTION/HYPNO possessed girls!!!!!! cuz the main guy is also mind broken so assaulting the girl non stop should be right up his alley or he can move on.

Base +5

The fact you do everything yourself doesn't change anything.
You got TWO critic comments, and not these who just say "its bad because I said so" asshole comments, you received constructive tips and corrections, and your reaction is to play the emotional appeal card? "Stop being a meanie or I will quit uwu"
If you can't take even the most basic critcism then maybe you really should quit already

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