I moved what was originally page 6 so that it's now page 2, as I felt its original position detracted from the anticipation and excitement as the story was building up to page 11 and onward.
Also, can someone please translate page 49 for me? I can't figure out what Eringi is saying, exactly.
Wait, you altered the original order based on what you thought fit better? Why are there so many people nowadays altering things just because they feel like it?