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Confusing as hell

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Please delete "[小K个人汉化]" and "[中国翻訳]" from title. these words meaning Chinese translate.

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I Have Done As You Had Requested

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@defcon5
It's almost like terminator 2 in plot, though with sex
Freya/Misae is some hero type fighting bad guys and is dating yato/mc. 2 'daughters' that were created by freya in the future are sent into the past because some enemies were sent back in time to kill past freya. Rather than try to discuss it there more the dark haired daughter decided to just brainwash them to quiet them. They send misae to safety but before they could do to mc some alien face hugger attacks and absorbs or something mc and turns him into slime, and from there forces dark haired sister to take it into herself.

From there mc wakes up freaks out that inside of the dark haired sister and is attacked by the white haired one. mc proceeds to use brainwashing power on sister out of reflex to save himself and then is talked to by the alien facehugger thing that first attacked him explaining things. From there more mind control shenanigans happen and the alien leaves mc (after transforming both the dark haired sister into mc and white haired sister into misae) with a request to kill freya. More sex and at the end mc decides to just do whatever he feels and that he rather have this misae that has sex with him than the real one. Seems there are 5 more pages. Unsure the what fully happens but one thing it seems is that mc rapes original freya/misae.

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5 pages are missing :(

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@Ayano123
Looks like there are some pages still not uploaded.

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Fixed thanks for letting me know~!

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@Ayano123
Repeated pages on page 28 and 29

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@ jwcodyrex
Fixed thanks for letting me know~!

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Thanks for the explanation.

The art is good but the story is nonsensical.

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I mean if you got time travel and you fuck up that badly just go back further and not fuck up.

You got time travel you shouldn't be vulnerable to a surprise attack.

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@Astearic
so, the dark haired sister died?

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Don't think its a fuck up. Looks like a stable time loop incoming.

Misae somehow grows up, gets super powers, and the ability to "create" people in the future. creates two daughters with super powers and sends them back in time.
Monster fuses with yato, Yato takes over the body of of mind control girl, and also gets the ability to shapeshift and make others shapeshift from the monster.

The ability to make others transform, and mind control them, would let him "create" daughters in the future. Seems likely Yato is Lady Freya, not Misae.

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the english looks like it's grammatically not bad at least, but the flow is messed up and broken.
idk, feels like when someone uses MTL bubble-by-bubble and just try to make each bubble read like good english when it's actually mistranslated.
i hope i'm mistaken.

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So the dude is a scumbag, and if that bitch had fucked him, and those two sisters hadn't been retarded, they wouldn't have released probably the biggest threat to humanity out there.

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@rirean
Effectively yes, she was taken over by the alien/mc goop. MC now has shapeshifting power as well as I assume brainwashing still, though he never uses again.
@sagematt
So it is, regardless, the story would have done well with either more pages or less twists and turns

Last edited on 13 October 2021, 03:26.

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@Astearic
Pay more attention, he's raping the girl that only showed up in the second to last page (Narumi).

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I fear that someone used only google translate and made the plot even more confusing than it really was

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Sexy but ????????????

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So if the sisters go back in time, get transformed into the dude and his girlfriend, i.e. their mother, and then bang...
There is a non-zero chance that they end up becoming their own parents.

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So....the starting 2 characters have 2 girls in the future. And the girls go back in time, hypnotize their parents as children, and send the mother into sub space. The protag (who is apparently future Dad) is then possessed by an aliens style facehugger alien, which is actually some sort of supervillain or rebel from the future that has gone back in time. It then melts onto his face and causes future Dad to also melt, and possess the future daughter who has mind control powers.

He then has hot yuri sex with his own mind controlled future daughter, while in the body of his OTHER future daughter. The alien/rebel/whatever from the future then exits him and oozes into the other daughter, and turns her into the young version of her own mother, and turns future Dad back into himself even though he's in the body of his future daughter. Then Future dad also turns into future Mom and they have hot selfcest yuri.

Aaaaand future Dad then proceeds to rape the real Future Mom, because reasons.

Wow, this story is so basic.

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This plot is doing double monkey backflips through time

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so it all comes to full circle huh? talk about time travel paradox, regardless if they came back in time or not, she would still get fucked in the future anyways... no pun intended. but then again all of these mess that happens in the future is caused by them travel back in time....

Last edited on 19 October 2021, 06:21.

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Uh...
What

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Some choice lines like "he wanted me to become the villain, but I'm my own man". Followed by committing several crimes."I'm the apex predator, so I'll make you unable to live without my cock!". Doesn't even try to rewrite her brain to want to fuck him, just wants to straight up mindbreak her the old fashioned way.

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