[Emori Uki] Saimin Apuri de Hajimaru Kinshin Kankei | Hypnosis app begins an incestuous relationship (COMIC HOTMiLK Koime Vol. 30) [English] [innyinny]

Posted on 13 October 2021, 07:30 by: innyinny

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Surprised emori uki did a black and white one, hope he doesn't stop doing full color, being published in a different comic than normal too

anyway it still had a fun premise though, enjoy

Raw: /s/80d27db84f/2022745-38

Posted on 13 October 2021, 13:41 by: mattijo

Emori uki is one of the most underrated milf artist. we need more Emori uki work translated

Posted on 13 October 2021, 14:22 by: xmanzero

Did you seriously write every single you're as your?
edit: I stand corrected, there is ONE instance of a correct you're

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Posted on 13 October 2021, 15:34 by: kidousenshi

I was surprised to see Emori's work in black and white as well. I think it's just cause of the magazine it was in.
Emori is still one of the best when it comes to color.

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Posted on 13 October 2021, 17:29 by: innyinny

sorry 1 or 2 grammar errors made you lose your boner, your one line shitflipping was literally more inaccurate than my 24 page translation

Posted on 13 October 2021, 18:22 by: ncc1701z

tbh all your uploads are littered with some grammar errors or typos that went unfixed and got carried on for a while now.
you should get a proofreader imho.

edit:
apologies if you felt slighted, i never meant any harm.
i said "littered with SOME" not just "littered with", in which i meant every upload have some errors on them and they have accumulated throughout all the uploads.
perhaps "littered" is not the correct word here. anyway i don't even mean to criticize, just trying to point out that this had been going on without being fixed.
i said nothing about it out of respect and some hopes that you will realize those errors on your own. but i guess that's also being "entitled" for you.
in any case you still have my appreciations. cheers!

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Posted on 13 October 2021, 20:39 by: yaps

How many layers of keikaku is this?

Posted on 13 October 2021, 23:33 by: Glovelove.

Proofreading is easier said than done; (Though I do think that this is an issue that should have been prevented by one.) In my experience, the majority of people you'll ask to proofread will just go "looks like English to me, I barely even noticed any typos so it gets my stamp of approval for being close enough". For good proofreading you actually need to search far and wide for grammar nazis that actually have time to read a script properly and even then they have a risk of getting so obsessed with trying to "correct" something that is merely a matter of preference that they might overlook more important issues. This difficulty finding proofreaders increases exponentially when you involve more controversial tastes like guro, NTR, furry, scat, vore, etc. because on top of most potential proofreaders blacklisting it, the people who have more niche tastes tend to develop an "I'll take what I can get" attitude where they're more likely to just gloss over imperfections without bringing them up.

And knowing where to look for proofreaders is another issue, it would be neat if we had something like a site where you could upload something good enough for general consumption, get some feedback in the comments and upload an updated version after adding in those fixes. We don't really have that though as far as I know...
-EH Seems to be designed for this but in reality, most of the feedback is as toxic as it can get and constructive criticism or advice is rarely posted and sometimes even downvoted into censorship by more toxic users disagreeing with the notion that scanlators deserve anything more than abuse for their mistakes
-Discord you can get decent feedback if you get the right community, but the line between "good community" and "echo chamber" is very thin, feedback easily gets buried and discord wasn't exactly designed to be a comfortable platform for sharing/reading manga.
-Pururin welcomes scanlators though they'll have to be a bit more self-sufficient on tagging than the general "just upload it and community tagging will take it from there" attitude we can get away with here, but they lack systems for easily updating/replacing existing galleries so they prefer if you just get it right on the first upload.
-Then there are the botrip derative sites like NH where the community might be friendly (at least I'd assume; If they were hard to please they wouldn't be content reading resizes), but the only way to get your content on those sites is to upload it to EH anyway........

Personally, I do a bit of all. For proofreaders I'll share the "rough draft" (a google doc with the raw pages and translated script) with the official Pururin discord and probably some specific friends or servers on the side, (especially if there's a parody tag involved, I think it's important to get proofreaders that know how a character would normally speak and understand the inside jokes otherwise you'll risk loosing those in translation. I consider required if achievable when approaching a parody tag you're not personally familiar with). Most of the corrections will come from being a nitpick myself but proofreaders do point issues I sometimes overlook like typos or sentences that run on too long. I'll only upload when I run out of things to polish/improve, not saying every issue will be resolved but "Close enough and mulling it over for a week hasn't gotten me any closer to improving it" is the least I'll settle for. When it comes to feedback I've had 80% of my community interaction by the time I actually upload the finished translation. When commenters give constructive criticism I'll be frustrated because it'll feel a lot of time polishing it up together with proofreaders has been wasted if it takes an outsider only a fraction of that time to point out a new improvement, but I'll thank them and get it fixed if it's worth the inconvenience of bothering my typesetter/editor about it, reuploading it, and bumping it for everyone in the process. The toxic responses I'll just try to ignore, they seem to multiply as soon as you give them any attention.

Don't have much experience to go on though, only two small projects ever made it far enough to be uploaded and one of them turned out to be incomplete, was in the process of fixing that when I got sidetracked by other things.

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Posted on 14 October 2021, 01:52 by: Katzius

Uh... would now be a bad time to try offering some constructive criticism?

Overall, the standard of grammar isn't bad - it's perfectly understandable, to be sure, but I have noticed one or two consistent... well, 'mistakes'? I'm not sure if it's right to call them that, but I do feel it's worth pointing them out for future reference. They're very easily fixed, so it's just a matter of being aware of them and turning bad habits into good ones.

1. I've noticed you tend to leave the full stop off the end of most normal sentences (i.e. if they don't have special punctuation at the end). I know it's tempting to think of each bubble as its own full stop, as it were, but it can be important under certain circumstances to show clearly where a sentence begins and ends, most importantly when one sentence runs over several bubbles or a single bubble contains several sentences. Just makes the text easier to read, you know?

2. Kind of as a follow-on from the previous point, your capitalisation is a little inconsistent: sometimes you capitalise words in the middle of a sentence (which can be confusing when combined with unclear sentence boundaries, as it might make one think a new sentence is starting when it isn't) or don't capitalise words that *should* be capitalised (like 'America', which is a proper noun). I'm not sure if you do this to emphasise certain words, which is fine, especially if they're emphasised in the raw, but there are better, less grammatically confusing ways of doing it, like using italics for example. If you REALLY want to emphasise a word then you can put it in all caps, but that is generally best used sparingly.

3. Your use of ellipsis is confusing at times: you seem to go for the double dot most of the time, but I've noticed you using the triple dot just a few times. I hate to sound like a prescriptive grammarian (which I am, sadly), but three dots is generally considered correct. I haven't read the raw so I don't know how often ellipsis is used in it, but it seemed to me like you were using it quite a bit? Again, this is one of those 'less is more' scenarios (unless it's like that in the raw, in which case, I guess more is more...?).

Those were the main three things I'd point out. I hope those points prove helpful to you.

You can get a proofreader if you wish, but if that isn't an option you can honestly just use any programme with a spellchecker - and yes, you shouldn't rely on automatic checking too much, but just for a once-over of any really obvious mistakes it can be quite useful. Of course, the aim is eventually to get to a point where you no longer need the crutch and can proofread for yourself, but even the best of us make mistakes from time to time.

I hope you won't let this bit of negativity get to you too much. If you enjoy doing what you do, then do it regardless of what others say; the doing in itself should be fun. Take it from me, doing things solely to get praise or validation from other people is a very effective method of becoming extremely depressed. If that's the only reason why you do this, then perhaps it might be time to look for another hobby? Up to you, of course. Either way, good luck.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 03:24 by: innyinny

@Katzius, that was perfectly constructive criticism. accurate, reasoned, helpful, specific, and stuff I hadn't really considered, and I can totally appreciate that.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 04:01 by: animal2909

Why dont I see this app on the app store? Every Son should have this app ;)

Posted on 14 October 2021, 04:59 by: mattijo

Can anybody explain to me what's that at the end? so from my understanding the mother actually hypnotize her son see her as woman and then intentionally tell him about the hypnotize app in order to have him sex with her? or she used the hypnotize app after their sex to keep him hook to her?

Posted on 14 October 2021, 06:21 by: cutegyaru

I've already pointed this out on the forums, but it's very funny to me that you have the gall to act offended by the criticism when you've been asking for OCR tools: https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showtopic=245656

Quite the "translator" you are.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 06:48 by: fishnchipz19

I usually don't like mind control, I find it very boring, but this is great. Emoro Uki makes some great incest manga, though I'm surprised that this one isn't in color like normally. The bit at the end solidifies this one as one of my favorites.
@mattijo, So in the story the son hypnotizes the mom at the mom's request because she wants to spend time with her husband, sex ensues. During the first half of the sex she think she's fucking her husband. In the second half the son turns off the hypnosis and she realizes she's fucking her son instead of her husband. She finds out that she likes her son's cock better than her husband and even though they say they were going to wipe their memories after the sex, they didn't do it. The ending is a little hard to follow but I don't know if that's the translation or the writing, but I'm pretty sure it's implied that she either hypnotized or is going to hypnotize her son into thinking that she's the most beautiful woman in the world so he will never leave her.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 13:08 by: Daruna

nice meltdown kid. I see your local timezone is in Europe, so you're an ESL *and* a MTL user. double whammy.

it's funny you threw this bitchfit over the correct criticism of your usage of "your" in places it shouldn't be, because i just randomly went to your previous gallery before this one and you've done the exact same fuckup there, too. you say "your welcome" instead of "you're welcome" in the comments. my welcome what?

go back to English class kid. and while you're at it, take even a single Japanese class you lazy fucking hack.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 16:05 by: AngraMainyuu

it's funny how it's always the same couple people acting like maladjusted assholes in the comments when a translation isn't up to their standards.
are you also all in the same discord server jerking and sucking each other off? i wouldn't be too surprised..

Posted on 14 October 2021, 17:59 by: cutegyaru

@AngraMainyuu
Yes, pointing out machine translations and extreme laziness is a true hallmark of "maladjustment". That is such an obvious conclusion. I see you defend MTLs and other refuse all the time. Perhaps you commission them? If so, I'm sorry for your loss.

Also, you acting like having STANDARDS is a bad thing is hilarious. Nobody is asking nor expecting professional-level works here, but there ARE bare minimums that should be expected (and demanded). I don't mind offering advice and support for newcomers, but let's face it, 2020 and 2021 have seen a massive influx of people who are new, yes, but also don't give a shit. Machine translators, exceedingly incompetent editors and scammers abound, and enablers like you are part of the problem.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 20:50 by: cutegyaru

@innyinny
I do commissions, and I also work for free in equal measure. You would know this if you spent more than 5 seconds looking at the galleries I've contributed to. This isn't a job for me, and I don't give a shit who people give their money to. Don't try to act like I have a financial interest in this.

I don't want to "chase everyone off". Who I want gone is people like you: frauds using OCR and machine translations and trying to pass it off as actually "translating". People with no desire to improve, no desire to do the works they "translate" justice, and no desire to fucking learn Japanese. I'm sick of you clowns polluting this site and I've been extremely open and vocal about it.

Oh, how kind of you to share the fruits of your "labour" to this community FOR FREE. We truly are blessed. No, wait. Nobody fucking wants MTLs, even if they're free. Even less MTLs filled with typos.

You're a hack and you've shown no desire to admit your own mistakes or try to improve. All you do is play the victim and seek pity points from your pathetic enablers. Fuck off.

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Posted on 14 October 2021, 21:41 by: Glovelove.

Typos are a human error, so "MTLs filled with typos" is quite the oxymoron. You either have a very.....unique.... interpretation of what counts as a machine without any attempt to improve or you have no fucking clue what you're even accusing people of.

The assumption that you're doing it just for the money is also quite easily made when everything that doesn't come from you or your own enablers is automatically a scam. Perhaps people wouldn't be going along with that line of thought as easily if you weren't so eager to project it at every opportunity provided.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 22:06 by: cutegyaru

@Glovelove.
Since you're blind, here is it is again: https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showtopic=245656

Do you know why anyone would use OCR tools? That's right. Because they can't fucking read Japanese. I don't even need to parse the translation. The proof is right there.

"The assumption that you're doing it just for the money is also quite easily made". This is such a fucking ridiculous made-up assumption, and plain wrong. If I only wanted money, I wouldn't ever bother doing passion projects, or helping with other groups. I have nothing to hide. My galleries are right fucking there for everyone to see, with clear indications as to which ones are commissions and which ones are passion projects.

"everything that doesn't come from you or your own enablers is automatically a scam." OP isn't a scammer and hasn't been painted as such. I said he's a fraud. Scammers look for money. OP is doing it for free. This doesn't excuse anything, but still.

My "own" enablers? What the hell are you talking about? Do you even know what "enabler" means?

I'm done replying. This is a completely lost cause. The next time you publish, OP, I'll give you the full treatment and parse through your translation.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 22:33 by: cutegyaru

Ok, I lied. I'm not done replying.

a) You can make typos and still MTL. I see it all the fucking time. It usually comes from god-awful editing to the MTL itself. Also, it's funny that here you admit your shit being full of typos and bad grammar, yet you were blowing a gasket a few posts up about people pointing that out.

b) You're a Japanese learner. That's great - you've raised in my esteem. I encourage you to stay on this path. However, translation isn't fucking meant for learners. If it does help you, then keep it to yourself until you've substantially improved. Using OCR tools is usually a dead giveaway to expose incompetent retards, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

c) Ah yes, the classic "THERE'S NOT ENOUGH TRANSLATIONS OF THIS GENRE OUT, SO I'M DOING IT!". Listen, I don't care if things stay untranslated forever. I would prefer that over poor treatment. I've said this a million times. Quality > quantity.

d) "YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE." Yes. I'm not here to be diplomatic or to stroke your ego. I see that you're a lot more motivated than most to learn and improve, however, which does make me less inclined to be an asshole.

e) Despite the way I come off, I truly want you to improve. If you want to keep publishing just to "spite" me, then please go ahead. If it's good shit, I will gladly give you words of praise. There's always a need for good, motivated scanlators on this site, and I welcome every single one of them. I'm not here to shit on new people, I'm here to expose frauds.

Oh, and by the way, I would take "popular" support with a grain of salt. I've seen literal rewrites with mountains of praise until they were exposed ;)

Posted on 14 October 2021, 22:53 by: Nomake Wan

"but misrepresenting the entire work as only having ONE correct occurrence.. when 23 were right out of 25, is just obnoxious, entitled selfish insulting bullshit.."

I read through all 24 pages. Of these 24 pages, there were only 6 instances of "you are" as a contraction. Of these 6 instances, you only got a single one correct. The hilarious part of this is that it was on page 24, and on page 24 you in another bubble manage to get it wrong. That is honestly impressive. So I'm not sure where you got "23 right out of 25," but you are just plain wrong. In case you (or other commenters) do not believe me, here they are:

p3
Your still totally Yuuya!

p4
Your so weird Shujiro♥

p22
Wow the way your moving your pussy is amazing

p24
You're getting used to it mom
Your not just hiding your embarassed about our Mother and son relationship

And since the "poor grammar" tag requires a commenter to point out 10 concrete examples of poor grammar, in addition to the 4 listed above, you can add the following 9:

p5
What are you kidding me?

p13
I want to endulge myself futher
Give so much pleasure..
My Mother's sweet calling out reminded me

p14
Maybe its just a habit That Mom calls out Dad's name..
Not some old Man It's my cock!

p19
Aah Wow it's like its sucking me in even more than before

p21
I won't get erection from my mom anymore back to normal

p24
It's been three months since then and were still together afterall

Additionally you seem to have major issues with random capitalization (perhaps this is because of the poor font you've decided on using making it hard to tell the difference between a capital and lowercase letter?), and you randomly called the father "Shugiro" on page 13.

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Posted on 14 October 2021, 23:05 by: Daruna

So which is it?

Do you consistently make grammatical fuckups?

Or are people "misrepresenting the quality of your work" with "smart ass INACCURATE insult"?

Posted on 14 October 2021, 23:54 by: Nomake Wan

@innyinny: Because of your forum thread.

As for me personally, feel free to browse around the comments I've left on other galleries as well. The pattern you'll see is that I, like cutegyaru and others, do not appreciate people who don't have the skill to translate passing off their "translations" as genuine. You then get casuals who comment without realizing how bad it is praising you (probably because they have as much of a grasp on English and Japanese as you do), as well as white knights like kidousenshi making fools of themselves trying to somehow justify poor quality as good.

If you want to learn Japanese, that's excellent. E-H needs more translators who understand the translation process. Who understand Japanese, and who have a firm grasp of English. But right now, that's not you, and yet here we are with you getting mad because people who -do- understand Japanese and who -do- have a firm grasp of English are pointing out your mistakes. And instead of just realizing that this abundance of criticism means you should probably take a step back and re-assess your situation, instead you choose to come back here and sperg out and get mad.

Getting good ratings doesn't mean jack when most users here who understand English don't understand Japanese. And a lot of them don't have a firm grasp on English either, so of course they're content with content like this. They literally do not know any better. I've seen galleries that were rewrites getting 4.5 stars right up until someone like me came in and pointed out that it was completely wrong in every way (at which point it usually hovers in the 3~4 star range).

Grow thicker skin, and put the effort you're putting into these sub-par translations into your Japanese education instead. Maybe find yourself a proofreader and an editor as well, if you can. There are plenty of Discord communities for scanlators you can join if you want help with any of the above. And if you're looking for Japanese resources, I have several recommendations for books that can help you out should you want them. Though the best way is still formal education from native speakers.

Anyway, hope that addresses your concerns.

EDIT: Oh, and also, none of the previous commenters followed the rules for the "poor grammar" tag. So to make the tag valid, I had to do that myself.

Posted on 14 October 2021, 23:55 by: Daruna

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/192934569748594688/898358387270635520/Untitled.jpg

shit I didn't get bingo

As for why I'm here, it's because I saw you whine about being unfairly criticized on the forums, so I went to go take a look at some of the things you've done. And as it turns out, all that "unfair" criticism? It's all legit, and in fact it's worse than I expected.

Remember when you did this? /s/5cea64acaa/1826366-2

Remember what you said when you were called out for it? "Alright fine I re-edited the entire gallery on my day off rather than translating other works.."

Acting like an actual child throwing a tantrum. "GOD... Fine! I'll clean up the mess I made! Can't believe you expect that of me..." It's super funny.

"I guess i consistently make grammatical fuckups because half of those i didn't even see a problem with when i reviewed it.. hell i still don't see what the problem is with many of them"

The fact that you don't know the difference between your and you're is also hilarious, congratulations on being worse at English than the average American.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/192934569748594688/898359590696140810/dfg1.png

Posted on 15 October 2021, 00:19 by: Nomake Wan

I'm being realistic. Most of the readers on E-H who understand English do not understand Japanese, and thus are literally incapable of telling if a translation is actually accurate or not. That's a statement of fact. And a pretty decent chunk of readers who understand English either don't have a firm grasp over the language (and are checking out English galleries because galleries in their native language are harder to come by), or simply don't seem to care about poor English in their porn. Again, that's just being realistic. It's what happens when you're on a massive site that covers the world. Statistics, baby!

Anyway, again, I do hope you get better, for the sake of readers who want to consume this content. They deserve better, and should be demanding better. That they aren't reflects poorly on them, not on those who are pointing out the problems.

And by the by, you mention that you have improved, and yet this is the comments section for your latest and greatest work. That also does not reflect particularly well.

So yeah. Take a step back, take a breath, refocus your efforts on learning Japanese, and see if you can't find a proofreader and/or editor to help you out where your weaknesses clearly are. Peace.

Posted on 15 October 2021, 00:28 by: Daruna

OCR is a valid tool but not one to be relied on 100% thanks to false positives. I'm still not convinced you're not an MTL user thanks to all the clunky translations present in all of the things you've uploaded that I've bothered looking at. At the very least you're an ESL though, as I pointed out in my initial comment (e-h forums shows your local timezone. That, combined with your consistent grammar fuckups and your inability to recognize basic English grammatical concepts leads me to doubt that you're British) which is yet another mark against you; even if you were completely competent with Japanese, why are you translating into something that isn't your native tongue?

Yes, I do believe that incompetents should not work on galleries on this website. If that makes me elitist, so be it. I won't shy away from the label. Scanlation deserves better than what you and people like you are capable of providing.

You improve only when your teeth are pulled out, and you grumble when things are pointed out to you. You go out of your way to deflect criticism; I spent a few minutes going through your older uploads, and the amount of times people pointed out that you were using resized images instead of the source images was only matched by the number of times you had a retort that said resizes were better than source images. Let's just say that the editors I shared those comments with vehemently disagree.

You complain about criticism being malicious misrepresentation, yet the criticism is valid. In this specific instance, the thing that set you off on this meltdown was being told (CORRECTLY, as Nomake has clearly demonstrated with his proof for the poor grammar tag) that you consistently fucked up a very basic yet key piece of grammar. And your response was to throw a huge tantrum and threaten to quit doing... whatever it is you do. That's absolutely hilarious to me.

I'm laughing at your awful attitude. Your entire forum whinepost and this entire gallery says that you're probably not cut out for the Internet, to be honest.

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Posted on 15 October 2021, 00:52 by: lurphysmaw

Why the fuck people on E-H writing dissertations and shit LMAO

Posted on 15 October 2021, 01:36 by: Daruna

"you don't know shit"

We do, though? I mean, it's self-evident that we do. Not only is it self-evident, you took the time in one of your sperg posts to count up our releases and how long we've been doing them in an attempt to make us look bad. You know, the big boys picking on poor widdle old innyinny ;_;

So, once again, your inconsistency is on full display. First it was "the criticisms about my lack of English ability are malicious!" which turned into "yeah, I have fucked up English, so what?!" Now it's "look at all these EXPERIENCED JERKS coming in here dumping on me!" which has turned into "you don't know shit!"

Which is it?

"you aren't perfect either"

I don't believe any of us said we were perfect. We're better than you, though.

"and I don't owe you or anyone else anything"

See, this is the difference between us. It's true, nobody really does owe anybody else anything here. But when I started out, I did feel like I owed something. I still do. I've been on e-h for 13 years now, visiting mostly every day, and I felt the need to give back to the place. So I did, and I decided to do my best to focus on quality. But you? You can't even be bothered to learn English properly to give the stuff you decide to work on the very best treatment they could get. You can't be bothered to find someone who is a capable editor to work on things with you, and instead settle for ugly releases. You can't be bothered to go find someone to be a proofreader for you. That's a shame. Watching this website become infested with people like you ever since the pandemic started has really been a downer. Scanlation is truly dying.

"I offered these translations for free in hopes that other people would get to enjoy these comics and for a modicum of appreciation to be payed my way for the effort, not this"

You fish for dopamine hits in a subgenre you freely admit is languishing in obscurity. And when you don't get that dopamine, you throw a bitch fit. If you can't take public criticism, harsh or otherwise, don't make yourself a public figure. Keep your uploads to yourself. The amount of effort spent on something is not a shield against criticism. It is entirely possible to spend gigajoules of energy on something completely worthless, as you have repeatedly demonstrated.

@lurphysmaw

Go find someone fucking up something you're passionate about and you might figure out why.

Posted on 15 October 2021, 04:08 by: dazo1

God, the mom is beautiful. Thank you

Posted on 15 October 2021, 14:31 by: huolonafssadasdas

I'm glad I got the double whammy of enjoying the doujin and seeing the TL have a meltdown in the comments

Posted on 19 October 2021, 15:38 by: Mr.Heartbeat

You know I'm not even mad, just disappointed.

Posted on 22 October 2021, 08:18 by: Aelth

I kind of hate these cop out "twist" endings.

Posted on 03 November 2021, 00:54 by: PipedPiper

wow this is a reversal from the common bad end trope. not that hostile hypnotism is good in any way, but wow. just wow.

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[Emori Uki] Saimin Apuri de Hajimaru Kinshin Kankei | Hypnosis app begins an incestuous relationship (COMIC HOTMiLK Koime Vol. 30) [English] [innyinny]

[江森うき] 催眠アプリで始まる近親関係 (コミックホットミルク濃いめ vol.30) [英訳] [DL版]