RAW: https://booth.pm/en/items/3298741
/g/2030902/fdc26700c7/

Please buy it if you enjoyed it.

Translated by MintVoid.

oh yeah, that's very gay, nice

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That was fast! Thanks!!!

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Gomabura's traps are perfect

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Gomabura is a real champ, their works are always so good.

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Is it consider NTR? or... lol

I need to say first: I don't mind. Just curious.

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I'm disappointed the narration skipped over the best part of such a story. "One month later" my ass

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@Argondr
its too 5Head, He's also Cucking us of the best part of the hentai
Truly a Multilayered NTR

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I wouldn't say this qualifies as NTR. The "NTR" element is too light. You could literally swap the girl for any random girl and the story wouldn't change. It's a shame that we don't get a little more at the end though. At least let us see what happens when he walks out the door dressed up like a trap while dripping semen.

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Gracias :)

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RAW: /s/94eedea545/2030902-33
ENG: /g/2036573/a4633d82a5/ (you are here)
ESP: /g/2062976/2a159d63ea/

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This TL is a little off in parts. Most of it is good enough that I wouldn't bother making a comment, but on the last page, he doesn't say "You're the worst". He says "そんなこと..." which literally translates to "That's...". A fairly liberal translation would be something like "I can't do that..." but "You're the worst" is too far, at least in my opinion. I think the brother is supposed to have lost all of his "sauciness" at this point in favor of cock.

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@Secluded
Hi! Thanks for checking my translation.

As far as I can tell, "そんなこと・・・" is a rather ambiguous statement that can mean lots of things ranging from "I won't do that" to "I might do that" with a few options in between ("If you make me do that, it would be really embarrassing"), or something unrelated ("How could you even say such a thing?"). In other words, it just shows the boy's disgust towards that idea without actually revealing whether he's going to go through with it or not.

I'm aware that "You're the worst..." isn't a direct translation of "そんなこと・・・" in any way, shape or form. However, it conveys the general emotion, keeps the ending ambiguous and sounds natural enough, so it was the best translation I could think of.

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@MintVoid
Yeah, it can be hard to TL lines like that of course, I just personally feel like you changed it too much, since it seems to me that he's in "dere dere" mode at this point, which would change the implication to something more along the lines of "are you really going to make me do that?" or one of the other things you said. "You're the worst" implies he's still a tsundere like before the time jump. I think Gomabura would've used 最悪 or something if he meant for it to be the way you TLed it. But it could just be that I'm the one who's misinterpreting it. The time jump leaves a lot of room for interpretation after all.

As for the other things I didn't like about your translation, well, you're probably just as good at JP (if not better) compared to me, so I imagine you're aware of the places you had to abridge or otherwise change the meanings of things to fit in English. I won't nitpick all of the things that I would've done differently since hey, we all have our own style of TLing, hah hah. But on the off chance you do feel like discussing it, you can always PM me or something.

Either way, I appreciate your work, and hope I didn't come across as rude, cheers friend.

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Ah brotherly love <3
As far as the translation goes there is so much room for interpretation that some artistic liberty is necessary. Most importantly it reads well.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 6. Translation 7. All out of 10.

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