i'm too tired to list the mistakes, but i'll start with a few. cmiiw page 3: - "9 year older" - "sou-kun mariagge is done only with..." - "...i'm telling it to you..."
page 5: - "...it hasn't been long when you were..." - "how i could forget" - "there's no way he forget~" - "so nostalagic"
page 6: - "i already try to understand but..." - "the promise back then it's like..." - "hana-chan must be see it that way" - "surely it only be a..." - "alone rembering that..." - "even so seeing..." - "i already think just like that"