A very amateur attempt at translation, because I didn't want to wait for one.

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The author clearly knows little about how apnea works - and it shows. Losing conciousness is not something that happens as if you got asleep - you get rather violent convulsions (the "samba" stage) before that.

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Always nice to see translated H2O content. So few and far between these days

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As a native english speaker, I can say with confidence that this is a very high quality translation, so don't be so hard on yourself :)
Good job Gitta, and thank you very much for putting the time and effort in creating this translation :)

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Glad to hear that.

I am unsatisfied when it comes to how the text looks though, so I will be looking for a way to improve it without redrawing the speech bubbles. If I can do that, there should be more H2O translations to follow in the future. I think it's a shame most of them are still untranslated.

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The text is fine, don't worry so much ^^

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